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Davros92
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2022-02-02 23:18

The MC is alone on his island, without company, and he summons monsters that allow him to defeat other humans who are neither friend nor foe, they simply exist somewhere outside. His only company are the invocations and strange voices. How do you know if the author of this story isn't describing a paranoid delusion in his own head? If there is no ending, we will know that the author, a poor sick soul, died of hunger in his delirium.

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Murky_depths
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ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6

This review is a lie brother

Murky_depths:
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ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6

I've personally read the mtl and it is in no way near what this review is saying. the simplest fact of him saying about mc is in an island alone is already wrong as if u read the synopsis mc is clearly in a desert and not alone as he and all other player become a lord and do have citizens to manage and govern.

Murky_depths:
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nyc_broy
nyc_broyLv11

Must be new around here

ExodusGaming555:I've personally read the mtl and it is in no way near what this review is saying. the simplest fact of him saying about mc is in an island alone is already wrong as if u read the synopsis mc is clearly in a desert and not alone as he and all other player become a lord and do have citizens to manage and govern.
ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6

LOL im not new in webnovel hahaha just look at my level, im already level 6 and I've been using this app since there's no paid content at all. If this app recorded me since that time, maybe im already at max level

nyc_broy:Must be new around here
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nyc_broy
nyc_broyLv11

The comment you replied to is clearly trolling, 1, the proof being it was posted months before it was readable. And 2, my comment was simple sarcasm. You seem to just have poor 'Internet EQ' (irrelevant stuff, truly), so, sorry for wasting your time.

ExodusGaming555:LOL im not new in webnovel hahaha just look at my level, im already level 6 and I've been using this app since there's no paid content at all. If this app recorded me since that time, maybe im already at max level
ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6

Dude.... 1. You do realize your first reply to me is the comment of me replying to another comment (not the review) in which he posted a R.I.P gif. He probably thought this review is true hence I'm just replying so he don't got fooled(just in case). 2. As for my reply to the review, I'm clearly telling other people who could be fooled by this guy that he is wrong. Plus you do realize that mtl and raw exist hence people could read the pilot read novels way before webnovel post it on trial read right? Hence a review from a few months ago is still legit as even faloo novels have a paywall at chp 57. 3. I agree that i have a bit lower than average Internet eq (cause i do tend be "serious" about things) but at that time my reply intent here is just playing along with the joke with no feeling of ill will at all as my account level is clear for anyone to see and then continues with a casual talk of how long I've been using the app since I'm bored. 4. what "offends" me more is you think that the reviewer is trolling and not theme hating or just toxic lol ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜†

Davros92
Davros92Lv5

I will reply to your comment later. I'm on my phone and the translator messes up the lyrics. Your msg was cut off a bit after RIP GIF. By the way, what is a GIF RIP?

ExodusGaming555:Dude.... 1. You do realize your first reply to me is the comment of me replying to another comment (not the review) in which he posted a R.I.P gif. He probably thought this review is true hence I'm just replying so he don't got fooled(just in case). 2. As for my reply to the review, I'm clearly telling other people who could be fooled by this guy that he is wrong. Plus you do realize that mtl and raw exist hence people could read the pilot read novels way before webnovel post it on trial read right? Hence a review from a few months ago is still legit as even faloo novels have a paywall at chp 57. 3. I agree that i have a bit lower than average Internet eq (cause i do tend be "serious" about things) but at that time my reply intent here is just playing along with the joke with no feeling of ill will at all as my account level is clear for anyone to see and then continues with a casual talk of how long I've been using the app since I'm bored. 4. what "offends" me more is you think that the reviewer is trolling and not theme hating or just toxic lol ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜†
KARMA_7
KARMA_7Lv3

hey there I saw your comments on other books and those were all one stars so I wanted you to review my novel ' good sin' and tell me what do you think of it.... can you!?

Davros92
Davros92Lv5

I've been reading your book. It has more Onomatopoeias than I'm used to ready which can be a positive or negative point. And do you use dialogues as a narrative resource, inspired by Asimov perhaps? English is unfortunately not my native language so my description may be superficial.Before commenting, do you want the five stars? Are you aware that it is a system that will not value your work?

KARMA_7:hey there I saw your comments on other books and those were all one stars so I wanted you to review my novel ' good sin' and tell me what do you think of it.... can you!?
KARMA_7
KARMA_7Lv3

nobody told me about how to properly use those, so I'm doing what I can hoping that people will realise my mistakes and tell me....

Davros92:I've been reading your book. It has more Onomatopoeias than I'm used to ready which can be a positive or negative point. And do you use dialogues as a narrative resource, inspired by Asimov perhaps? English is unfortunately not my native language so my description may be superficial.Before commenting, do you want the five stars? Are you aware that it is a system that will not value your work?
Davros92
Davros92Lv5

My English teacher pointed out that the best place to test is in children's animations. And that he himself, in his master's degree, saw an article about onomatopoeia in the animated adaptation of the purple dinosaur Barney.

KARMA_7:nobody told me about how to properly use those, so I'm doing what I can hoping that people will realise my mistakes and tell me....
KARMA_7
KARMA_7Lv3

we all look over trivial things and forget the basics... thanx I'll look into it....

Davros92:My English teacher pointed out that the best place to test is in children's animations. And that he himself, in his master's degree, saw an article about onomatopoeia in the animated adaptation of the purple dinosaur Barney.
Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv5

I'm sorry for coming in but just wanted to say that the comment you initially replied to said rip most likely to the author dying ๐Ÿ˜….... but anyways idk if I'm right but I wanted to state this anyways

ExodusGaming555:Dude.... 1. You do realize your first reply to me is the comment of me replying to another comment (not the review) in which he posted a R.I.P gif. He probably thought this review is true hence I'm just replying so he don't got fooled(just in case). 2. As for my reply to the review, I'm clearly telling other people who could be fooled by this guy that he is wrong. Plus you do realize that mtl and raw exist hence people could read the pilot read novels way before webnovel post it on trial read right? Hence a review from a few months ago is still legit as even faloo novels have a paywall at chp 57. 3. I agree that i have a bit lower than average Internet eq (cause i do tend be "serious" about things) but at that time my reply intent here is just playing along with the joke with no feeling of ill will at all as my account level is clear for anyone to see and then continues with a casual talk of how long I've been using the app since I'm bored. 4. what "offends" me more is you think that the reviewer is trolling and not theme hating or just toxic lol ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜†
ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6

Although ii don't think do but sure i guess

Omnidoa:I'm sorry for coming in but just wanted to say that the comment you initially replied to said rip most likely to the author dying ๐Ÿ˜….... but anyways idk if I'm right but I wanted to state this anyways
Reborn_Killer
Reborn_KillerLv3

Thereโ€™s a level beyond 7 and 8

ExodusGaming555:LOL im not new in webnovel hahaha just look at my level, im already level 6 and I've been using this app since there's no paid content at all. If this app recorded me since that time, maybe im already at max level
ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6

Bruh, are u trolling? You do understand that achieving this level would take months if not one or a few years depending on your activity on this app. What i am implying is that i have been using this app for a long longgggg time. So I'm very confused on why tf are u bringing up the further levels....

Reborn_Killer:Thereโ€™s a level beyond 7 and 8
Reborn_Killer
Reborn_KillerLv3

Cause am telling the truth. The max level right now is 9 btw if you donโ€™t know

ExodusGaming555:Bruh, are u trolling? You do understand that achieving this level would take months if not one or a few years depending on your activity on this app. What i am implying is that i have been using this app for a long longgggg time. So I'm very confused on why tf are u bringing up the further levels....
TheGrinningFiend
TheGrinningFiendLv13

Reborn_Killer:Cause am telling the truth. The max level right now is 9 btw if you donโ€™t know
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Maybe it's because he just so happened to build a hero resurrection building, but still. He doesn't even revive his dragon once he gets back to his territory even though he could, but waits like a week before doing it. Worst thing, he revives the unit off screen! The author doesn't even care. When he does get new units, they only shine for 1 or 2 fights. And by shine, I just mean the author actually writes about them fighting. It's not a cool, well written fight, but just saying what they do with no extra detail. It's almost like a turn based game. Every fight is the same. Nothing unexpected. His units are practically not even part of the story anymore. There's even a huge arc, like 50 chapters or so, where his unit's only show up for the first 3 then disappear for the rest. Don't get me wrong, it was a nice arc, but still. Even when his unit's do fight, they just unite under the sentence "Richard's units fought the enemy." None of their unique gimmicks, different styles, no nothing. 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puukkiss
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Solo_9013
Solo_9013Lv1

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