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ALOKDYLONLv11yr
2023-03-10 15:46

The MC throughout history lives up to his name because he only dedicates himself to being the slave of other people and I accept everything they tell him to do without protest, just stop being a pathetic slave to a bigger one that follows faithful whatever order they give, there is no autonomy. If you want to read a story of a person blindly following someone without complaining and getting nothing in return this is for you on the other hand this is absolute rubbish.

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MylittledragonLv3

Let me guess. You're probably some jealous author? Why didn't you just use your real account? I doubt if 'you'll even see this reply

L_PorenLv1

You sure about that little dragon?

Mylittledragon:Let me guess. You're probably some jealous author? Why didn't you just use your real account? I doubt if 'you'll even see this reply
L_PorenLv1

Sunny can sIit a dying man's throat without remorse, yet gets all weak in the knees when women enslave him. From mean kid from the streets to domesticated doofus. I guess that's what passes for character development. I skipped ahead and Sunny is still eating Changing Star's dust after 750+ chapters. Effie basically says that he will never surpass Nephis.

MylittledragonLv3

yup, he is probably a top 25 or maybe even a top ten.

L_Poren:You sure about that little dragon?
SyntheticHumanLv2

You really missed the point of all that. Nephis has a motivation strong enough to drive all her actions,all sunny wanted to do was survive. Effie didnt say he will never surpase neph, just that without the proper conviction he wont. He took it to heart and has himself in the way of danger despise all his instincts sayings its a stupid idea just so he can find his own conviction. If sunny was suddenly surpass nephis thered be little motive for him to move forward. He needs to grow and his only two reasons to continue are nephis and the sovereigns…and maybe rain.

L_Poren:Sunny can sIit a dying man's throat without remorse, yet gets all weak in the knees when women enslave him. From mean kid from the streets to domesticated doofus. I guess that's what passes for character development. I skipped ahead and Sunny is still eating Changing Star's dust after 750+ chapters. Effie basically says that he will never surpass Nephis.
L_PorenLv1

Sunny shouldn't need extra motivation; He's a slave. Taking 800+ chapters to surpass his boring classmate is not 'sudden.' I'll pass.

SyntheticHuman:You really missed the point of all that. Nephis has a motivation strong enough to drive all her actions,all sunny wanted to do was survive. Effie didnt say he will never surpase neph, just that without the proper conviction he wont. He took it to heart and has himself in the way of danger despise all his instincts sayings its a stupid idea just so he can find his own conviction. If sunny was suddenly surpass nephis thered be little motive for him to move forward. He needs to grow and his only two reasons to continue are nephis and the sovereigns…and maybe rain.
KAAS1234Lv2

bro thought this novel was: shadow super harem op generic mc slave

samuraii99Lv3

Either you are the author's second profile or someone paid by him. Either way, you are the slave's slave which is even more pathetic.

KAAS1234:bro thought this novel was: shadow super harem op generic mc slave
Fool_KingLv12

Funny how he can one shot her now

L_Poren:Sunny can sIit a dying man's throat without remorse, yet gets all weak in the knees when women enslave him. From mean kid from the streets to domesticated doofus. I guess that's what passes for character development. I skipped ahead and Sunny is still eating Changing Star's dust after 750+ chapters. Effie basically says that he will never surpass Nephis.
WoS_HeaftcliftLv14

Nope he can't and besides he shouldn't right now.

Fool_King:Funny how he can one shot her now
Fool_KingLv12

He killed her

WoS_Heaftclift:Nope he can't and besides he shouldn't right now.
WoS_HeaftcliftLv14

okay, who are talking about then?

Fool_King:He killed her
Fool_KingLv12

I’m talking about how he basically killed nephis

WoS_Heaftclift:okay, who are talking about then?
WoS_HeaftcliftLv14

Oh, when was that or do you mean that one time in the crimeson spire?

Fool_King:I’m talking about how he basically killed nephis
Kawayo_DinoLv1

Did we read the same story? Sunny would kill anyone just so not to be a slave..... That includes the person he love.....

Kawayo_DinoLv1

Actually he does surpass her....also if u read it properly.... U would know that he he was willing to kill her when she made him her slave.... Also his a slave only in name..... She never uses her power over him..... And he still has plans if she ever tries to make him a real.slave

L_Poren:Sunny can sIit a dying man's throat without remorse, yet gets all weak in the knees when women enslave him. From mean kid from the streets to domesticated doofus. I guess that's what passes for character development. I skipped ahead and Sunny is still eating Changing Star's dust after 750+ chapters. Effie basically says that he will never surpass Nephis.
AllVerdLv2

'Because he lacks conviction'Effie said.The only reason Sunny isn't stronger than Nephis is because she accumulated more power by killing more monsters in the dreamworld as a sleeper.Also,she is from a legacy clan btw. Sunny doesn't eat from the palm of Changing Star because he is hopeless simp .In fact,he doesn't eat from her palm at all.This is the same guy who almost ripped open her throat for saying his name.He was willing to let Cassie die in the Forgotten shore because he didn't see her as a damsel in distress but rather a liability. There is no chivalrous bone in this man's body.Which is not to say that he is completly devoid humanity but it cuts close to it. Do you even read it or parts of it that haters mention?

L_Poren:Sunny can sIit a dying man's throat without remorse, yet gets all weak in the knees when women enslave him. From mean kid from the streets to domesticated doofus. I guess that's what passes for character development. I skipped ahead and Sunny is still eating Changing Star's dust after 750+ chapters. Effie basically says that he will never surpass Nephis.
AllVerdLv2

He dedicates himself to survival and being no one's slave,not even FATE'S.I don't know which Shadow Slave you read but it ain't this one.'No protest' are we talking about the same guy who,in the spire,tried to chop Neph's head for saying his name? He never follows Neph because he is hopeless or that he even trusts her,he does so because he trusts her judgment. You are defiantly the most deluded hater I've come across so far.

CoolAweSomeGuyLv1

how can one be this deusional😭

samuraii99:Either you are the author's second profile or someone paid by him. Either way, you are the slave's slave which is even more pathetic.
Rk6TLv4

Little to motivate him? are you stupid? The guy's "conviction" when he was in the first nightmare was to survive, no conviction is greater than fighting for your freedom and survival. So what did he lack? No, author already decided when he/she was writing this novel to make the MC a true slave, change his personality from ruthless survivalist to a wimp who enjoys following women's lead and being a slave to them...

SyntheticHuman:You really missed the point of all that. Nephis has a motivation strong enough to drive all her actions,all sunny wanted to do was survive. Effie didnt say he will never surpase neph, just that without the proper conviction he wont. He took it to heart and has himself in the way of danger despise all his instincts sayings its a stupid idea just so he can find his own conviction. If sunny was suddenly surpass nephis thered be little motive for him to move forward. He needs to grow and his only two reasons to continue are nephis and the sovereigns…and maybe rain.
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