Lorenzo_Kim

So smart u forgot his mom was the earthworm witch

It kinda resembles honeycombs. Cute

Some actually live longer

You’re alone in your thoughts here

This is how you write a kingdom and world building novel. I love the pacing and I’m shocked this is ranked lower than those horrible novels at the top. The fight scenes are good and never ever stretched out. It has an element of slice of life which is incredible and the MC is not ANNOYING. I’ve read 150 chapters and this is just really well written. I hope we get to see this novel to the end. Author I really like it.

This is a genuine review. I have read 55 chapters and I can say that the idea of the story is good but the writing and editing is so bad that it actually interrupts your reading flow. It’s extremely hard to follow through when you’re reading how he fights or even how other people fight. The descriptions of fight scenes are so so so so hard to read along. However the story is good. As in the over all idea of the story and originality is there. I jsut can’t get over how hard it is to follow through with fight scenes. I’m talking directly about the infiltration chapters around chapters 48-55 or so. It’s so jarring

It’s confusing cus the author makes such horrible grammatical mistakes. The idea of the story is good but the writing is so damn confusig

This book is good but so many grammatical errors making it hard to read sometimes cus the flow is disrupted

Nah the way this book is so good. We need more world building delicious novels like this. I stayed up 24 hours to read 150 chapters. PLSSSS DROP MORE I NEED THIS LIKE OXYGEN

Please keep going with this novel. Only one feedback is adopt more of the show more than tell method of writing but I love it so far