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Death_SoundsLv153yr
2022-04-02 00:45

read up to the 70s and dropped it, its not even bad as far as writing goes it just feels slow and i never get the feeling of wanting to read more or get hype about the main character, i feel like the initial part of the story had me hooked and everything after felt like a drag. So it's a good read if you don't mind that kind of story, just not for me

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Obese_Pigeon
Obese_PigeonLv11

i recommend you to read a few more chapters, after the initial fights and things repeating it gets really, really interesting exspecially with the start of volume 2, you will find new mysteries and a glimpse of one of sunnys companions past, with more characters and a diverse and new setting, it hooked me up a ton. Not only that its kinda shame you dropped it at the 70's since i actually enjoyed the plot twist about the tree and sunny trying his best to convince his friends to leave and even fight them 10/10 for me, i hope you could give it a chanceee[img=update]

Daoist679622
Daoist679622Lv2

Maybe you should put it aside until the chapters accumulate and read again. It may not happen in every chapter, but the story as a whole is grandiose

SnoringDragon_
SnoringDragon_Lv5

I also feel the same do i am dropping it too. I have read it to till 200. Whole story feel slow.

Xerxes546
Xerxes546Lv13

just got to 96 and said nope. I hated the memory tree, and time skip. plus, still in same dungeon. I hear that it just continues like that for a while. No beef or hate towards novel, I'm just going to bounce cause the pacing is not my speed. also sunless seems like two differnet people. I understand that characters can grow or change, but quiet introspective survival sunless is very different from sunless school arc/ in a party sunless. it was very jarring and weird to read.

KUNALKASANA
KUNALKASANALv2

broo you left a lot of things by droping it

secretplotter
secretplotterLv2

It's not for everyone's taste like LOTM because the writer creates a story that is complex and focused on other characters + the main character doesn't become super op just by a system. It has the emotions to make you feel the characters are real and you can relate to them. And for that Most of the people who read Harem, a Main character who doesn't work for their powers. face slapping won't like this type of story.

KUNALKASANA:broo you left a lot of things by droping it
KUNALKASANA
KUNALKASANALv2

well there sare all type of people in the world i gusse

secretplotter:It's not for everyone's taste like LOTM because the writer creates a story that is complex and focused on other characters + the main character doesn't become super op just by a system. It has the emotions to make you feel the characters are real and you can relate to them. And for that Most of the people who read Harem, a Main character who doesn't work for their powers. face slapping won't like this type of story.
Flow_Gilgamesh
Flow_GilgameshLv11

i recommend audiobook i listed to it as well as read here to support the shameless author, anyways for some reason its better to listen than to read this, but the audio in the app is trash so try odysse search shadow slave chapter something ☺️. still i read for a better detail. also speed should be around 1.25 to feal like someone is reading you a bed time story

Darving_Dasilva
Darving_DasilvaLv1

oque o tiktok fez com as pessoas kkkkkkkkkkk

SnoringDragon_:I also feel the same do i am dropping it too. I have read it to till 200. Whole story feel slow.
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Guiltythree
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Shameless author here :) Writing a review for your own book is not easy, so I'll just say a few things. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments! - "First of all, what is this book about?" It's about a guy named Sunny who lives in a dystopian future where some people are forced to periodically visit a magical world and battle terrible monsters. If they survive, they receive special powers. - "What type of guy is Sunny?" He is a cynical, disillusioned young man with a bleak outlook on life. But! He has a sense of humor and a strong desire to not only survive but also thrive in this world. You'll like him, I promise. - "Will he be overpowered?" Not really. He will certainly become powerful, but not powerful enough to steamroll over his enemies. Every victory Sunny achieves will be won with cunning, hard work, and skill. So, more of a Dark Souls type of situation. - "Will there be romance?" Yes, but a slow one. - "Romance, you say! So... a harem? There is a harem, right?" Not really. Sunny will be surrounded by a lot of beautiful people, both male a female, but he will probably only have one romantic relationship. Uh... one at a time, at least. We'll see! - "How often are you updating?" Currently, I'm dedicated to writing one chapter every day. The amount may increase in the future, but it depends on a lot of factors. - And, finally... "Aren't you too full of yourself? You rated your book five stars!" What can I say, it's a great book. One of the best books I've ever written! I've only written one other book, but still. It's definitely one of the top two best books I've written in my life. If you don't believe me, check for yourself ;)

Ashton_A
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Over my course of reading novels for years I have to say this is by far one of if not the best novel I've ever read. The plot, background, and characters are original following NO cliches, they are utterly amazing and brings a new concept to magic and powers. The character in no way feel one dimensional and all feel like living, breathing characters. The main character is relatable but at the same time not as we are not in his situation. The MC has a brain and uses it yet actually has emotions even though at first he seems kind of cruel which was pretty cool also. MC is not OP but also not weak and uses his intelligence to defeat his obstacles including the greatest one, his flaw. Flaws an amazing system the author made to show some kind of downside of getting powers besides the obvious risk of death in a nightmare. At first I was unconvinced by the flaws importance to the novel and felt something were forced for about... 1 chapter. The chapter after I immediately realized the importance of the flaw and how satisfying it was to see him shape what he says in a way that doesnt break the rules of his flaw. Him outsmarting others even while under a flaw is the most satisfying thing ever. Personally, I abhore any romance in novels, mainly because its a reminder of my loneliness and it is usually forced or stupid, however even though they havent yet, there are moments, and I will genuinely stab my eyes out if the MC and Changing Star don't hook up, perfect webnovel couple. The grammar is impeccable, not sure about updating stability because I just read it all in one go. Background is detailed without being too much exposition, and is ORIGINAL and actually very interesting. Especially the authors way of utilizing prophecies which I cant go to far into because of spoiling. But the prophecy seemed well though out, had me wishing for a explanation, and honestly cant complain. All in all this novel is the one true gem of webnovel and should make all the other trash bow down and delete itself. I am now going to donate power stones every day. Please give this novel a chance, while its a little slow at first, after a few chapters it will not dissapoint. Especially the comedy, its actually funny. Author, never give up on this novel or I will hunt you down and make you continue writing. This feels like it has been written by a famous author.

GhastlyGryffon
GhastlyGryffonLv15

Hey there folks, Griffin here. Resident music composer, game developer, and occasional enjoyer of good books. I’m here to give a COMPLETELY UNBIASED review of Shadow Slave, written by a good buddy of mine named Guiltythree. Before getting into an actual review, I’d like to start by saying that my absolute favorite part of this piece of literature, beyond the awesome story, is the community surrounding it. The Shadow Slave discord server is one of the few online spaces I have been a been active in that truly makes me feel like I’m part of a family. And that isn’t just because I recently found out that I’m long lost cousins with the one of the lead moderators (true story, shout out NobleQueenBee 😂). Never have I been a part of a community so active, engaged, non-toxic, respectful and loving. I cannot recommend enough that you join the server if you end up reading this wonderful webnovel. Speaking of which, it’s probably time I start talking about the actual novel. I’ll split the review up into 4 simple categories: Characters, World Building, Power System, and Story. —————— Characters: —————— If you’re looking for a generic overpowered protagonist who crushes every obstacle in his way, you came to the wrong place. And while those types of characters can be fun to read, they often lack the depth and complexity that makes a character feel truely *real*. Sunless, the main character of this story, is a flawed and realistic human being. His thoughts are as realistic as his approach to problems; I find myself often thinking that I would make very similar decisions if put in similar situations. His weaknesses push him to work harder. Every challenge he faces is an opportunity to learn. Instead of steamrolling every encounter, Sunny is almost always facing an uphill battle. Through hard work, quick thinking, and sometimes sheer luck, he just might be able to come out on top. That isn’t to say Sunny never gets his time to shine, there are quite a few memorable power fantasy moments. But through and through, Sunny’s dark humor, wholesomely pessimistic nature, and Tsundere complexion make his perspective an absolute joy to read. Beyond it’s protagonist, Shadow Slave is overflowing with unique and loveable characters. Guiltythree brings so much life to the cast of this novel that even the villains are captivating. Even the points of the story where I would be bored if I was reading any other novel are made to be intimate and refreshing through the carefully crafted complex characters that Guilty has introduced us to. A simple dinner conversation between old friends demands as much of my attention as a climactic battle, simply because you grow to cherrish every single one of cast members. They feel like real people I have met and befriended. —————— World Building —————— The world of Shadow Slave, similar to Guilty’s other novel, is a gritty and realistic dystopia. Flashy elements of fantasy and sci fi collide and serve to distract the reader from the grim reality behind the scenes. At the forefront of your attention are the awakened individuals, people walking around with super powers, fighting with metal armor, bows and swords to defend the citizens from the Nightmare Creature threat. But as much as the government propaganda would like you to believe in these real-life heros, they are just as shady as any human society can be. There are starving orphans on the edges of the city, sweatshop labor conditions for factory workers, the climate and weather has become polluted to the point of lethality, and there is the ever-present lovecraftian threat of the Nightnare Spell. 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