2.5 personal rating. Always hate the Chinese vibes in fanfictions about worlds that have nothing to do with chinese cultivation novels. You don't cultivate or 'refine chakras' in naruro. Sometimes the tl gets names wrong and repeats itself. I appreciate the notes explaining idioms, I guess. The mc is sort of like an empty sheet of paper. Random wish for peace is all he has, which is not that interesting.

if I'm not mistaken isn't there is a story about this already a Chinese one at that and from the description it does sound a translated Chinese one specially the wording so if it is please say so

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this will damage your braincell for every subsequent chapter because chinese language is dumb and it is difficult to translate to english language that make any sense. chinese language is one of the most dull-witted language ever. for example the name obito, when translated from chinese to english is the following: -(the people who brought the soil)= uchiha obito -Taito=obito -(blackened soil)= uchiha obito -(Uchiha brought soil)= uchiha obito -( the soil)= Obito -(bringing the soil)= obito -(with soil)=Obito -(on soil)= on obito ......etc many more just for one uchiha lol how many uchiha do we have? chinese are dumb

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the beginning was very interesting, however, in the future it became deadly boring. and the plot is just disgusting. the beginning was very interesting, however, in the future it became deadly boring. and the plot is just disgusting

Very enjoyable to read. This is really a unique Naruto fanfic especially the main character and i also like what was done with. Almost every other famfic puts Danzo as the evilest character that has to be killed the first chance one gets but here in this fanfic it's really good and unique. The Translator also does a great job and there are minimal mistakes. I recommend this to every Naruto fan it's really soo good! At last i want to thank the Translator for this amazing Translation and i hope you keep translating because this is really something special out of all the Naruto ffs.

Ah yes. “Refine chakra” and “cultivate.” The two things every Chinese fanfic says even though that’s not how chakra works. This wasn’t even edited by a human either. Wind “Escape” instead of Wind Release. “Human Pillar” instead of Jinchuriki. Magatama instead of Tomoe. And what is Earth - Earth - Spear? Is it supposed to be hand seals? Is it Earth Release: Earth Spear? No one knows.

Godzilla absolutely dog walks the Naruto verse so imma just let it stay a 3 star rating for the inconsistency in the power scaling but hey, this is a FF which is also Chinese so can’t expect the greatest