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AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv23yr
2022-02-22 22:37

2.5 personal rating. Always hate the Chinese vibes in fanfictions about worlds that have nothing to do with chinese cultivation novels. You don't cultivate or 'refine chakras' in naruro. Sometimes the tl gets names wrong and repeats itself. I appreciate the notes explaining idioms, I guess. The mc is sort of like an empty sheet of paper. Random wish for peace is all he has, which is not that interesting.

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Arthas_D_Leon
Arthas_D_LeonLv3

Agreed, I'm not trying to be xenophobic but it's seems the vibes this fanfic giving me out of the places...very different from your usual naruto fanfic...and meh this giving me "Wuxia" cultivation thingy vibes

LulzLowKey
LulzLowKeyLv13

I read the synopsis and could easily tell it would be stupid. like, Godzilla does have a tail so it can't be a no-tail beast or whatever

Varun_Mohunah
Varun_MohunahLv14

Stooooopid. Read then give a review.

UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Look on the cover, Godzilla has a freaking tail there too

LulzLowKey:I read the synopsis and could easily tell it would be stupid. like, Godzilla does have a tail so it can't be a no-tail beast or whatever
Eins_Mensch
Eins_MenschLv14

why read something you dont like in the first place? i didnt even need to read the entire first chapter to find "refining" chakra or the usage of "expert" for a strenght level. so no whining here.

Varun_Mohunah:Stooooopid. Read then give a review.
Varun_Mohunah
Varun_MohunahLv14

That's the thing. How do you know you don't like it? You must have read a part of it or something. Then you say you don't like it and why. That is a contructive review. Some authors don't have english as 1st language. So this may help them improve. So yeah. Stoooopid, read then give a review.

Eins_Mensch:why read something you dont like in the first place? i didnt even need to read the entire first chapter to find "refining" chakra or the usage of "expert" for a strenght level. so no whining here.
Eins_Mensch
Eins_MenschLv14

Yes i read a part and decided i dont like it, not gonna read more or the whole story when i dont like even the first five chps and i very much have the right to make that known, otherwise why would there be a review function for stories? As for getting better in english, there is school that helps with that, youre only writing down what you know from the language youre writing in in the form of the story, doesnt when copying work from others or just google translate it. And i personally think this is a copy from a mtl from some rdm site, happens fairly often and explains the bad english aswell as the strange wording including the writing style, the description is quiet a common example for that and i saw it similar in over a hundred stories on mtl translation sites in both good and bad translation + editing. Btw its "Stupid" not "Stopid", not sure why youre saying "Stopid" on purpose but it sounds ridiculous.

Varun_Mohunah:That's the thing. How do you know you don't like it? You must have read a part of it or something. Then you say you don't like it and why. That is a contructive review. Some authors don't have english as 1st language. So this may help them improve. So yeah. Stoooopid, read then give a review.
Onions
OnionsLv3

ong, bro types like he in a cultivation novel or smn

Eins_Mensch:Yes i read a part and decided i dont like it, not gonna read more or the whole story when i dont like even the first five chps and i very much have the right to make that known, otherwise why would there be a review function for stories? As for getting better in english, there is school that helps with that, youre only writing down what you know from the language youre writing in in the form of the story, doesnt when copying work from others or just google translate it. And i personally think this is a copy from a mtl from some rdm site, happens fairly often and explains the bad english aswell as the strange wording including the writing style, the description is quiet a common example for that and i saw it similar in over a hundred stories on mtl translation sites in both good and bad translation + editing. Btw its "Stupid" not "Stopid", not sure why youre saying "Stopid" on purpose but it sounds ridiculous.
Eins_Mensch
Eins_MenschLv14

If you think that then you never actually read a cultivation novel... what i did there was ranting.

Onions:ong, bro types like he in a cultivation novel or smn
LuciFer_Kardam
LuciFer_KardamLv4

bro is this a harem

AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv2

I don't think it was

LuciFer_Kardam:bro is this a harem
LuciFer_Kardam
LuciFer_KardamLv4

AnotherAtlas:I don't think it was
DongLong
DongLongLv4

i think it was supposed to be him talking to kisame who is called tailless beast

LulzLowKey:I read the synopsis and could easily tell it would be stupid. like, Godzilla does have a tail so it can't be a no-tail beast or whatever
orangegummy
orangegummyLv13

chinese alway want to spread their culture on every jp anime cuz china nuba on . 🤢🤮 alway cultivation shit vibe meh

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