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2024-02-24 08:02

Ah yes. “Refine chakra” and “cultivate.” The two things every Chinese fanfic says even though that’s not how chakra works. This wasn’t even edited by a human either. Wind “Escape” instead of Wind Release. “Human Pillar” instead of Jinchuriki. Magatama instead of Tomoe. And what is Earth - Earth - Spear? Is it supposed to be hand seals? Is it Earth Release: Earth Spear? No one knows.

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