Arthas_D_Leon

I have been just scroll fast to read this shit in the past chapter...since that force plot fucking killing his wives and his unborn fucking baby...I read this kind of shit to relieve stress not to beore depresed...even if there's twist plot here it just kind of loss...The feeling just lost, I just read this more just to get the heal when the mc revive his wife and unborn child to reduce a bit of my depresion with this one...and after that I quit this one...Gonna get PTSD especially when I was reading just for relieving stress

So is he randomly teleport to nilfheim or is it his designation because of that is his "home"?...If Nazarick are teleported from Helheim to Midgard then it is reasonable

The timeline is fvk up...The character personality is fvk up...the stories is fvk up...well sometime I was wondering does the author even watch the anime? is he even knew the plot? there is 700 ch but bruh bad start...

alright lads...wait for the next update now

Bad, very bad...I know this stories is not about romance but this is just leaving a bad taste on my mouth...he's cold and doesn't give a fvk to woman, and when finally he choose a woman he jusy leave her in small island almost got raped by so thugs...it's really bad,

The rway mc giving relationship with the girl is very bad...He is not a girlcareman, he's cold...Vernon and Hina leave him and found their own lover because he giving they cold shoulder....And little shit choosing Baby 5 instead who he also leave alone in small Island almost got raped and then playing clitche hero rescue...fvk the romance was so bad that so shine outweight the stories making it taste bad in mouth

his love interest also mess up...first itwas vernon but he just give her cold shoulder so she leave him, then Hina who repeadly remind him but still he doesn't care about her at all and also leave him...and the stupid thing is he choosing Baby 5 who he always leave alone and only come once in a while...This really dissapointing nd heartbreaking for people reading this BS...

Well, he just kinda toyed with whole ninja world now...I mean this fanfic has become slice of life the moment he fvk the goddess of ninja

Yeah, your progressing in his romance life is too sudden dude, I mean from what I've seen the relationship between Thena and MC is not romantic yet before the chapter 50...It's just so sudden for me to accept Thena suddenly said something straightforward...is it her character tho? Mc I understand it's because his time spend with helen and 1000 years timeskip but for Athena her sudden change to character must be because of the request of comment so I think that's what make you stir their relationship...And It's not like I don't read your books, In fact I've been finish reading it and just kinda wait to stack the chapter a bit to read again...

you ignoring my point here, you were making a character you know who at the start is a bit stiff to the like people and suddenly without any proper thing you giving him a romance, your character is ok bit but the story is to sudden...have you seen clearly at the moment he doesn't know what romance is or he think of it as it is just 20 chapter spending time with others...and with 1000 years timeskip, it is inevitable that the feeling will be off a bit, you need progress man...the romance is so sudden thay making me thinking "do these woman really think he still love her just because he kiss her 1000 years ago?" you self giving the vibe of boredom to the character yet you didn't think of it so of course I would point it out and oh, don't be a jezz...I do critizing your books but not to the think outside of it, grown up...mark