The grammar is good....character's dialogue as well as the pacing of the story is good...I also love the fact that the mc ain't a simp as well as he doesn't have a hero-complex...the only reason i won't be giving this a 5-star rating is because of the chance of the mc having a harem in the future(since there is a harem tag)...i just don't like having harems in a modern world setting and i do hope the author just sticks to 1 and hopefully its gwen....but overall i see quite the potential in this fanfic so keep up the good work author-san
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LIKEAuthor .. Hope it's harem?. In the end it's still a fantasy world. And Gwen, mj, Felicia, and Natasha. Those 4 are best if you want to develop a good romance . In the if it's harem.. I ll read further. Tbh i haven't found a good marvel fic with harem. Some becomes pokemon where mc only simp and gets trolled here and there and some just with one girl and waste our time giving unnecessary love drama.
I mean a harem in modern world is already tough and most characters in marvel wouldn’t accept being in a harem. Unless the author pulls some AU sh**
screw mj, unless we talking zendaya but i never liked the other ones