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Yanagi_sense1
Yanagi_sense1Lv143yr
2022-01-07 12:25

The grammar is good....character's dialogue as well as the pacing of the story is good...I also love the fact that the mc ain't a simp as well as he doesn't have a hero-complex...the only reason i won't be giving this a 5-star rating is because of the chance of the mc having a harem in the future(since there is a harem tag)...i just don't like having harems in a modern world setting and i do hope the author just sticks to 1 and hopefully its gwen....but overall i see quite the potential in this fanfic so keep up the good work author-san

I Am Peter Parker (MARVEL AU)

ashes_
4.8
90 Chs

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ashes_
ashes_Author

Thank you. It means a lot T.T

3yr
18
Yanagi_sense1
Yanagi_sense1Lv14

no problem weeb and i do hope you manage to make the harem work since although i said i aint a big fan of harems, id still love to see where this story is going☺️

ashes_:Thank you. It means a lot T.T
3yr
12
ashes_
ashes_Author

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Yanagi_sense1:no problem weeb and i do hope you manage to make the harem work since although i said i aint a big fan of harems, id still love to see where this story is going☺️
3yr
8
Man_of_culture_69
Man_of_culture_69Lv3

Author .. Hope it's harem?. In the end it's still a fantasy world. And Gwen, mj, Felicia, and Natasha. Those 4 are best if you want to develop a good romance . In the if it's harem.. I ll read further. Tbh i haven't found a good marvel fic with harem. Some becomes pokemon where mc only simp and gets trolled here and there and some just with one girl and waste our time giving unnecessary love drama.

ashes_:Thank you. It means a lot T.T
3yr
14
MrIIIo
MrIIIoLv5

I mean a harem in modern world is already tough and most characters in marvel wouldn’t accept being in a harem. Unless the author pulls some AU sh**

Man_of_culture_69:Author .. Hope it's harem?. In the end it's still a fantasy world. And Gwen, mj, Felicia, and Natasha. Those 4 are best if you want to develop a good romance . In the if it's harem.. I ll read further. Tbh i haven't found a good marvel fic with harem. Some becomes pokemon where mc only simp and gets trolled here and there and some just with one girl and waste our time giving unnecessary love drama.
3yr
5
BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

Who are the harem members?

ashes_:(⊃｡•́‿•̀｡)⊃
3yr
TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13

Respect for not giving it a 1 star just because you dont like harems, and actually leaving an honest review on the rest of the story

3yr
25
Ivan_Smirnov
Ivan_SmirnovLv1

1000 power Stones collected, waiting...

ashes_:Thank you. It means a lot T.T
3yr
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

i like harem and good fanfics so it's awesome 👍

ashes_:Thank you. It means a lot T.T
3yr
2
Ivan_Smirnov
Ivan_SmirnovLv1

The one rule for all si at marvel, firstly kill Reed Richard, or he will always do things, that can destroy earth

ashes_:(⊃｡•́‿•̀｡)⊃
3yr
1
pervy_sloth
pervy_slothLv4

screw mj, unless we talking zendaya but i never liked the other ones

Man_of_culture_69:Author .. Hope it's harem?. In the end it's still a fantasy world. And Gwen, mj, Felicia, and Natasha. Those 4 are best if you want to develop a good romance . In the if it's harem.. I ll read further. Tbh i haven't found a good marvel fic with harem. Some becomes pokemon where mc only simp and gets trolled here and there and some just with one girl and waste our time giving unnecessary love drama.
3yr
2
Other Reviews
CodeSpectre
CodeSpectreLv4

Its really good !! And People stop complaining about how he isn't Saint Peter Parker !!! He's a bloody reincarnate !! Anyways the writing quality is good,good character design and I really wish the author does a mass release !!

3yr

Zack_Smith_9438
Zack_Smith_9438Lv10

Hmm, I like this story, I like it a lot. This story has great potential BUt. If youll Like to know my biggest fear…. ……. Youll drop it like the rest

3yr
as_ss
as_ssLv1

its a story about peter parker but without any of his values, which means its a Spider-Man story without the friendly neighborhood Spider-Man.

3yr
ImNex
ImNexLv2

I like harem but that's not the reason why I like this fanfic. Okay. Maybe, it takes apart in it but mostly because the dialogues are entertaining and kind of refreshing.

3yr
OPRamenGuy
OPRamenGuyLv14

Haven’t read it yet but a piece of advice is that u should toughen up, there’s a lot of people who like to shi* on writers if something dosent fo their way and that causes a lot of writers to drop. Good luck with the story

3yr
Passing_Critique
Passing_CritiqueLv3

Current Chapter :32 The story is about an SI who wake up as Spiderman. At first I thought this would be just like "The Spider" by Imjusttryingtofindmyway and to a degree it is similar. The way Peter goes to Baxter, evolving his physique, arsenal and flirting with Susan is similar to how the Spider and this story goes. The difference is that this Peter to a point of view is not really mentally stable. He kills when he can subdue it's opponent. Kills for the heck of it while justifying it with an excuse that it would be better in the long run and I agree. I know this Peter is not a HERO and for a genius he didn't think that killing criminals he encounter would not put a target on his back? That's also the one thing I'm honestly baffled, Peter killed quite a lot of grunts and S.H.I.E.L.D didn't even knock on his door? the mortality rate should be a sign to warrant an investigation but the rumors of a Mutate running around killing criminals should be a code red for them to put manpower on investigating Spiderman identity but there's none of that. The fanfic while good, has its holes, some of it are a bit forced, that luck just falls to to the MC's lap. for example is the Spiders and the tech. Also Reed doing what he did in the chapter 27- 31 is quite an OOC. I don't normally review a fanfic so I might not made this clear and good. I have many things to point out like training and his action on imitating the Creed and how he fails on it but........ nah.

2yr
IvanArcadia
IvanArcadiaLv4

I like how the character development of the story. The story development so far have been amazing. I love the story progression of the Fanfic.

3yr
Ali_Karaca
Ali_KaracaLv1

this parker is better than the original parker i always found it ridiculous that you don't take money from the guys you beat up ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

3yr
whitethief274
whitethief274Lv5

watashi wo namae wa petaa parka spidaar mun. and I really like the character interaction in this ff. I also like that this is a harem while harem sometimes spoils the story so I just hope you can make it work.

3yr
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