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Yanagi_sense1Lv143yr
2022-01-07 04:25

The grammar is good....character's dialogue as well as the pacing of the story is good...I also love the fact that the mc ain't a simp as well as he doesn't have a hero-complex...the only reason i won't be giving this a 5-star rating is because of the chance of the mc having a harem in the future(since there is a harem tag)...i just don't like having harems in a modern world setting and i do hope the author just sticks to 1 and hopefully its gwen....but overall i see quite the potential in this fanfic so keep up the good work author-san

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ashes_Author

Thank you. It means a lot T.T

Yanagi_sense1Lv14

no problem weeb and i do hope you manage to make the harem work since although i said i aint a big fan of harems, id still love to see where this story is going☺️

ashes_:Thank you. It means a lot T.T
ashes_Author

(⊃。•́‿•̀。)⊃

Yanagi_sense1:no problem weeb and i do hope you manage to make the harem work since although i said i aint a big fan of harems, id still love to see where this story is going☺️
Man_of_culture_69Lv2

Author .. Hope it's harem?. In the end it's still a fantasy world. And Gwen, mj, Felicia, and Natasha. Those 4 are best if you want to develop a good romance . In the if it's harem.. I ll read further. Tbh i haven't found a good marvel fic with harem. Some becomes pokemon where mc only simp and gets trolled here and there and some just with one girl and waste our time giving unnecessary love drama.

ashes_:Thank you. It means a lot T.T
MrIIIoLv5

I mean a harem in modern world is already tough and most characters in marvel wouldn’t accept being in a harem. Unless the author pulls some AU sh**

Man_of_culture_69:Author .. Hope it's harem?. In the end it's still a fantasy world. And Gwen, mj, Felicia, and Natasha. Those 4 are best if you want to develop a good romance . In the if it's harem.. I ll read further. Tbh i haven't found a good marvel fic with harem. Some becomes pokemon where mc only simp and gets trolled here and there and some just with one girl and waste our time giving unnecessary love drama.
BreezyNovelsLv5

Who are the harem members?

ashes_:(⊃。•́‿•̀。)⊃
TreacherousVoidLv13

Respect for not giving it a 1 star just because you dont like harems, and actually leaving an honest review on the rest of the story

Ivan_SmirnovLv1

1000 power Stones collected, waiting...

ashes_:Thank you. It means a lot T.T
Deadrule_vivekLv5

i like harem and good fanfics so it's awesome 👍

ashes_:Thank you. It means a lot T.T
Ivan_SmirnovLv1

The one rule for all si at marvel, firstly kill Reed Richard, or he will always do things, that can destroy earth

ashes_:(⊃。•́‿•̀。)⊃
pervy_slothLv4

screw mj, unless we talking zendaya but i never liked the other ones

Man_of_culture_69:Author .. Hope it's harem?. In the end it's still a fantasy world. And Gwen, mj, Felicia, and Natasha. Those 4 are best if you want to develop a good romance . In the if it's harem.. I ll read further. Tbh i haven't found a good marvel fic with harem. Some becomes pokemon where mc only simp and gets trolled here and there and some just with one girl and waste our time giving unnecessary love drama.
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