Current Chapter :32 The story is about an SI who wake up as Spiderman. At first I thought this would be just like "The Spider" by Imjusttryingtofindmyway and to a degree it is similar. The way Peter goes to Baxter, evolving his physique, arsenal and flirting with Susan is similar to how the Spider and this story goes. The difference is that this Peter to a point of view is not really mentally stable. He kills when he can subdue it's opponent. Kills for the heck of it while justifying it with an excuse that it would be better in the long run and I agree. I know this Peter is not a HERO and for a genius he didn't think that killing criminals he encounter would not put a target on his back? That's also the one thing I'm honestly baffled, Peter killed quite a lot of grunts and S.H.I.E.L.D didn't even knock on his door? the mortality rate should be a sign to warrant an investigation but the rumors of a Mutate running around killing criminals should be a code red for them to put manpower on investigating Spiderman identity but there's none of that. The fanfic while good, has its holes, some of it are a bit forced, that luck just falls to to the MC's lap. for example is the Spiders and the tech. Also Reed doing what he did in the chapter 27- 31 is quite an OOC. I don't normally review a fanfic so I might not made this clear and good. I have many things to point out like training and his action on imitating the Creed and how he fails on it but........ nah.
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Why would SHIELD have an issue with him killing people when two of their Agents Black Widow and Hawkeye do the same thing, not to mention the work with the Hulk who has killed people, and Thor, a God, who has killed tons of people in battles he’s fought
Really? you're asking that? Peter is a vigilante, he is killing people and in the eyes of the law, that is a crime. Not only that, He is also an enhanced/mutate, that means he is a threat to the society if he snap. Hawkeye and black widow are agents, if you don't know why SHIELD don't have problems if they're agents kill, then maybe because it's in their job description and they're allowed to.
I was gonna tell you why you are an idiot but someone did it better
KsoGhost:Why would SHIELD have an issue with him killing people when two of their Agents Black Widow and Hawkeye do the same thing, not to mention the work with the Hulk who has killed people, and Thor, a God, who has killed tons of people in battles he’s fought
Punisher and Deadpool, two characters in the Marvel universe who go around murdering people and Shield doesn’t care
DaoistObvious:I was gonna tell you why you are an idiot but someone did it better
