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Claudia_Nunez
Claudia_NunezLv133yr
2022-04-14 06:05

So far the story is interesting, I do like how the main character doesn't immediately fall in love however it makes it seem like he won't ever fall in love with the king, which is not an ideal romance story. Gets confusing when he suddenly starts having feelings for him even if it's mostly sympathy. It's a good concept when done right, but it is a difficult one to achieve. Basically a bland story with predictable plot, but interesting nonetheless.

Transmigration: Wake Up as an Annoying Concubine

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I super love it!! like oh my gosh!! the characters interactions with each other are so interesting, mc is nice but knows how to scheme but at the same time he's so adorably innocent like! like!

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Really good and cute novel! Would definitely recommend as a short and sweet read. I hope the author writes more stories in the future!!! ☺😍🙏

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Very fulfilling story with a lot of drama action love scenes passion.Cheering on the side for the characters. This was a marathon reading . Worth the extra money spent on it.

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Okami_Aquila
Okami_AquilaLv12

Ah, I was going to wait until I've read the entire book, but I can barely get past chapter 3 without some critiques. Proper address of the servants and masters are a given, this is a period piece set in ancient China even though I haven't seen a dynasty mentioned still the manner in which the people speak is off putting. Have you ever watched or read a Chinese period novel or drama? It's a great story and plot but the voice I get from it is 'modern American'. Please consider revisions if you haven't already and you might benefit from reading 'From Ceo to Concubine' by Queeniecat on here bc that is a well written Ye Dynasty transmigration piece.

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love how you ended the story good job author

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