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Robert_Thompson97
Robert_Thompson97Lv152yr
2022-11-19 06:51

I know this is a fanfiction but this is not how Hela acts. Also it jumps around too much and we are barely given any informatiom about the characters and the interactions are surface level so we dont know anything about our characters and then Hela breaks out gets beaten and is now going on dates the next day enjoyimg college human life? Yeah dropped

Marvel; My wife is Hela; Goddess of Death, Just Saiyan

Elliot_Jackson
4.5
82 Chs

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Elliot_Jackson
Elliot_JacksonAuthor

Ok thanks for reading

2yr
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Elliot_Jackson
Elliot_JacksonAuthor

I am shamelessly rating my own story five stars... Why? Because I can.... If you have any questions please let me know. This is as it said, a no harem story.

2yr

SkyNeves
SkyNevesLv11

I hate doing this kind of half-a*sed review but the first two chapters p*ssed me off and I didn't feel like keep going. I'll try to do a basic review based on what I read. 1-Writing Quality: The writing is decent, it's not the best but it's not the worst and in WN we've all seen the badly written translations so we know what bad looks like. [3 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: What is this? We go with the flow and what the author feels like writing. Space pod crashing in a city? Done. Going Great Ape in the City? Done. Consequences? Is that fruit? [2 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: There's no dept, consistency or common sense to any character in the first two chapters. MC gets adopted like a lost puppy. No one noticed the crash. A bleeding woman acts like nothing happened. *Sigh* 4-Update Stability: I don't know, I added this today and am removing it on the same day. [3 Stars Here] 5-World Background: There is no World Background, there is no scene description, there is no "painting a picture", there is no setting a scene. You just read. [1 Star Here] OVERALL: 2.2 Just so people don't think this is bull on my biased opinion read the first two chapters, it might be the story for you. This is just not it for me, I can't see my brain cells die like this. Here's a recap of what I commented on the author's post: "The level of bull in this story is amazing. For future readers this is just chapter 1, I don't know if it improves but right now this is the illogical stuff that happened in this reincarnated cross over. In case this gets deleted I'll post it again later. Shield notices incoming objects all the time, captain Marvel situation ring any bells? And if that's not enough a space pod crashes in earth and no one comments, makes a fuss and only the couple notice that. And that's not even the cherry on top. NO! The cherry is having a kid living in the city turn into a giant as* Ape and not one fuss from SHIELD, HYDRA, The Hand or the Military! And as a Bonus Magic or the mystic arts is so common that Aunt May managed to get him to learn "Magic"."

1yr
Glory_Frost
Glory_FrostLv1

I love this story so much!!!!! Hela is so sweet and so funny !!!!! Can't wait the sequel 😍 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

2yr
Sandy_Cave6359
Sandy_Cave6359Lv4

the only thing that annoys me is the title, unless something changes, which at this rate will take 70 more chaps before they get married, pls change the title

2yr
Ash_black005
Ash_black005Lv4

i love this novel and eagerly wait for future update 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

2yr
Life_sa_Beach
Life_sa_BeachLv4

32 chapters in and I gotta say it's fine but not everyone would enjoy it. The kids ruined it. 100% ,them having children lowered the quality. And character development could have been better, the first 5 chapters of the fic was good after that it was just too rushed. And now after 30 chapters I just feel bored there isn't enough information to enjoy. The novel is like a slice of life so in my humble opinion a time skip was unnecessary and the fic went down hill from there on. I expected something like Silverfire but it didn't quite live up to the expectation.

1yr
BornToKillYou
BornToKillYouLv1

LOVE IT!!!! .

2yr
SnowApathie
SnowApathieLv4

2yr
Daoist6lhMwu
Daoist6lhMwuLv3

Muy bien, sigue adelante, es una historia nueva sin el harem prácticamente común en todas las novelas, tiene potencial, solo ponle una portada que atraiga más lectores.

2yr
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