Item: The rise of the pervert primordial
Rating: 5
Author: IppoHajime

IppoHajimeLv19mth

2024-07-20 22:13

I started Reading casually,but the world enviroment and your own progress as a writer is amazing. While Reading, you were able to pick my curiosity on what Will happen when he finds his godmothers. One thing i liked the most too, is that, while the MC has a harem, not every girl Will be part of, as the main goal for the MC is a big and happy family. Overall, i belive your work is a gem, please dont stop writing , for your fans,of course. Sorry for my english, its not my main language!

The rise of the pervert primordial

Barion_Trident

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Barion_TridentAuthor

Thanks man, yeah I have progressed quite a lot since my early (and cringy chaps XD) I like to give every girl a backstory and development as a part of the family/harem which plays a huge part in the world building of the novel, since I hate cardboard decoration harems.

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