Item: The rise of the pervert primordial
Rating: 4
Author: HazeUniverse_1

HazeUniverse_1Lv23yr

2022-02-04 02:44

story is great but you should use commas and punctuation marks brackets etc and make it more Readable overall it is nice I will support you with power stones so keep it up bro

The rise of the pervert primordial

Barion_Trident

4.6

683 Chs

Liked by 10 people

Replies4

Barion_TridentAuthor

Thanks for the support i will work to improve on my grammar.

3yr

JoethedeathLv15

you should post a self review so that people have an easier space to ask questions lol ( dunno if you have a discord for that ) was wondering whats going on with this novel, i took a month or so break to let chapters stack up and somehow your other novel actually almost caught up in chaptera to this one? are you slowly dropping? ( really hope not ) or is something goin on? just curious as i loved this novel and it was my first if yours to read

Barion_Trident:Thanks for the support i will work to improve on my grammar.

1yr

Barion_TridentAuthor

Don't remember if I already answered another comment of yours, so I'll say it in this one, not dropping or anything I just had a messed up schedule in the last month, everything will return to normal, in fact I might be posting more then once a day in pervert primordial depending on the situation XD

Joethedeath:you should post a self review so that people have an easier space to ask questions lol ( dunno if you have a discord for that ) was wondering whats going on with this novel, i took a month or so break to let chapters stack up and somehow your other novel actually almost caught up in chaptera to this one? are you slowly dropping? ( really hope not ) or is something goin on? just curious as i loved this novel and it was my first if yours to read

1yr

JoethedeathLv15

super glad to hear this, you should also post a self review or set up a discord so that your readers have an easier place to ask you any questions, thank you for all your hard work

Barion_Trident:Don't remember if I already answered another comment of yours, so I'll say it in this one, not dropping or anything I just had a messed up schedule in the last month, everything will return to normal, in fact I might be posting more then once a day in pervert primordial depending on the situation XD

1yr

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