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Ayush_Saxena_9129
Ayush_Saxena_9129Lv11yr
2023-05-28 04:06

The pace of the novel is very slow in comparison with other similar novels in the same genre. Same goes for the mc to become stronger if not for the fact that he can fight more than his power allows , Also from the way author is going with novel it looks like it will take months to reach certain arc where mc meets his origin family and with some female character introduced which are possibly future harem members are way above his current power and knowledge which tells it will be a long novel not that i mind because it will be good but if the pace was a bit more than it could have been more enjoyable . like literally it takes so much chapter for mc to just turn from 11 to 12. as far as i have read i.e till chapter 400 it is overall good with some problems which can be rectified in future.

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Jonas_Calixto
Jonas_CalixtoLv13

understandable. i would like more chaps per day too. maybe the author doesn't have time to post more chaps cuz he is writing two novels!? i dont know man.. -_-

Chris_Gill
Chris_GillLv15

At the rate this is going it will take Months to meet the Godmothers, and probably a year to finally meet the Drage family. Mission for a month to two months (reader time), 2 weeks of a lemon scenes, repeat. We have only finished the 3rd mission in the Sect Arc.. Just opened his shop, still hasn't even advanced to the manifestation realm yet... /

Chris_Gill
Chris_GillLv15

The cost of the daily chapters means the word count is close to double normal novels, but the content per chapter moves the story 10-20% of a normal novel.

Jonas_Calixto:understandable. i would like more chaps per day too. maybe the author doesn't have time to post more chaps cuz he is writing two novels!? i dont know man.. -_-
Aditya_Kakade_5263
Aditya_Kakade_5263Lv13

let's not forget about divine heavens and his two friends there it will take years but as long as the author finishes his book I'm fine with the wait.....that being said we should get at least one chapter per week but something must have happened for the updates to stop.

Chris_Gill:At the rate this is going it will take Months to meet the Godmothers, and probably a year to finally meet the Drage family. Mission for a month to two months (reader time), 2 weeks of a lemon scenes, repeat. We have only finished the 3rd mission in the Sect Arc.. Just opened his shop, still hasn't even advanced to the manifestation realm yet... /
Blaman_10
Blaman_10Lv15

sorry to tell you but it gets worse

RagingMutant
RagingMutantLv15

It’s been more than a year since your comment and he still hasn’t met the godmothers. I blame the authors painfully slow release date. Sometimes we get 1 chapter a week and sometimes we don’t get a single chapter in 2 months. It’s super frustrating. ATP I honestly wish I never started reading the story.

Chris_Gill:At the rate this is going it will take Months to meet the Godmothers, and probably a year to finally meet the Drage family. Mission for a month to two months (reader time), 2 weeks of a lemon scenes, repeat. We have only finished the 3rd mission in the Sect Arc.. Just opened his shop, still hasn't even advanced to the manifestation realm yet... /
Chris_Gill
Chris_GillLv15

yeah the story was painfully slow when we got a chapter a day. I keep trying to drop it, but it is one of the few stories where the MC isn't mentally challenged.

RagingMutant:It’s been more than a year since your comment and he still hasn’t met the godmothers. I blame the authors painfully slow release date. Sometimes we get 1 chapter a week and sometimes we don’t get a single chapter in 2 months. It’s super frustrating. ATP I honestly wish I never started reading the story.
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