Thanks for the feedback bro, it's good to see that you find the concept of the novel enjoyable, as for the negative part, it's not intentional, I do sometimes end up extending some chaps more than I originally intended to, but I never realized it was to the point of it being a problem, I think that even when I put slice of life I try to mention a couple of things that are actually important for the story, maybe some times is too slow.

If it makes you feel any better just know I'm EXTREMELY freakin picky. As an example: I can't remember the last time I gave anything 5 stars on here if I ever have lol and I have read very very much on here. I don't know if this helps but for what it's worth. You're one of the best in the ero writing parts I've seen. But yeah the pacing of the novel as a whole was what was gettin to me. As an aside I would like to say it was visible to see you're getting better as you're writing more. So keep up the work. You are improving. I think it's mostly that right there that is going to be keeping me keep an eye on this novel or you as an author over a period of time.

Thanks and no hard feelings bro, I do try to improve and it's good to see others notice it's not just empty words : )

This is super freaking delayed but I would like to say your other story with the Van Helsing system is ( in my opinion) much better written so it really shows you've grown in several ways as an author in my eyes.

Yeah I know, I mean it's noticeable even from the initial chaps that I was less of a noob with van helsing XD

Just wanted to say, good job man!

Thanks : )

Why has the release rates for both your novels decreased? (I haven’t read your novels for a while, so I wouldn’t know if you mentioned the reason in an author’s note)

Oh, I had some troubles to deal with, you know boring real life stuff XD, only recently I started recovering my posting rate, also nice to see you still around, are you stocking chaps?

Smells like slow poison , should I start ?

For what it's worth I haven't removed it from my library. I just haven't read much either since like chapter 300 or so ish since I was rubbed the wrong way on this story and needed a break but again it wasn't enough to make me wanna drop it at the time. If memory serves me correctly the authors other story Van Helsing System, or whatever it was titled( I took a break on that too, not because of being bummed but that I had caught up and wanted to leave room to be able to binge read a bunch) I can't remember the exact name, was a clear example of an author improving all around.