Addressed to those that are dissatisfied with how this is written or have problems with the system or other things. All I can say is sorry that you are unhappy at how some things may be poorly explained or constructed. Please remember that this is an unedited story that has not undergone any fixing or proofreading. There will always be issues that you will find. The only way I can fix this is to stop writing and go back and correct everything but that way I would end up disappointing those who have stuck around so far and still enjoy what I have wrote by missing upload deadlines. I cannot possibly satisfy every reader, especially those that cannot make it past the first half of the story and wish to drop it. I am putting out 13 chapters for two novels that are ongoing so I do not have the time to go back and rewrite it. So how about this… At some point when I have reached the end, I may open up a new version and make some corrections if there is even a strong enough following and support for it still. Again, thanks to all of you that constantly leave positive feedback and give some constructive criticism that will help me spot where I have went wrong.
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LIKE1. This is purely a hobby for me that takes up a lot of time already to do without any rewards for my efforts so please respect that. 2. My education in English literature and English was to the comprehensive school level and I never pursued this line of education further in the subject of writing, it was not until later that I got interested in manga and web novels that I decided to even try to write my first book.(which was dropped) 3. My second book has been unnoticed for sometime and recieved little praise or criticism so I have not been able to identify where things do and do not work. Moving onto a fanfic was purely a small project that evolved as it gained more popularity, it has problems but there is nothing I can do right now. I am too busy as of late and can only try to apply some of the advice of others to the later parts and try to answer some questions when I can in the comments. 4. This is all completely free and unrestricted and I receive no payments for you reading anything I have wrote so I have a limit to my patience and tolerance that I am willing to handle. This is not a warning but a reminder that even the most hardworking people can still crack under the pressure and give up completely. There are many books left unfinished on Webnovel and I really hope that I will have the mental fortitude to finish at least one of my projects.
Present lengths of books/webnovels which have a chapter word count of 800 to 3500 Bombyx: Return of the Vengeful First Daughter - 337+ chapters (mid to late stages) Kan-Gar-Chu! - 331+ chapters (mid to late stages) Pi-Gar-Chu! - 43+ chapters (early stages) Dr who is where now? - 16+ chapters (introductory stages) Renegade Jenny - 10+ chapters (introductory stages) Apotropaic in Danmachi - 4+ chapter (introductory stages)
3 original novels that have release date between every 5-7 days. 4 fanfics released every 5 days which are dragon ball, Pikachu One Piece, danmachi and Pokémon fanfics. Main fanfic which has more frequent releases every 3-4 days is Kan-Gar-Chu! Which is a One Piece fanfic. Most of them are updated and in drafts ready to be released on time and regularly.
Why did you end up giving her a bounty? The only thing it does is to create unnecessary conflict and restrict her...Attacked by slavers? Just sink the Ships...That took all my motivation to read away... I'm sure I will return in a few weeks to continue, but I really hate that every single One-piece fanfic gives their MC's a bounty just 'because'...Yes there are corrupt marines but it's not like every single person who sets sail gets a bounty...Even the "Undeserved" Bounty's in the show had reasons behind them...and I just can't find these reasons here...there wasn't even a reason for her to be at G-5...and her race being discovered in a crowd, by someone who doesn't even know she exists, while you said several times earlier that electro was the discerning feature of her race is simply stupid...she fought in a war which was watched by several countries while using electro without being discovered and then she gets discovered randomly from far away while being in a crowd without doing anything that would draw attention to herself?
Up to you if you do not wish to continue over the bounty issue but not all bounties can be completely accurate and can be a permanent thing. A bounty does not mean that her life is over especially when all they had was a blurry image etc. The Sanji bounty is just an example of that.
Yeah, I do understand that, but it just feels so forced. And I'm not dropping it, it's to good overall for that, but I am taking a little break.
Hi, This is my first time reading a one-piece fanfic with female mc(literally the first, like, I've not read any novel/fanfic of any category or genre with female mc) so, if possible, can you, like, tell me what to expect in this, cuz I don't want this first experience to be ruined because I didn't know about something that should be paid attention to or should be known beforehand, so that I don't end up with disliking novels/fanfics with female mc.
I cannot go into spoilers and such but basically the MC is a reincarnated girl with a system that aids her in purchasing knowledge with fame points to help her with knowing how to master new skills. She is born in the Mink tribe and her approach to the OP world is less aggressive unlike most MCs that enter the world going around killing every pirate or marine they come across.