Cawaii_Cat

a "Devil Fruit Extractor" sounds better imo.

Just get the names right ffs. everything else seems good. I do hope you continue updating the novel tho, its pretty interesting.

dis one

Swim Swim fruit? so he can swim on land but for that, you're gonna have to kill off the current user somehow

Just give him the yami yami no mi. I don't think Teach has it yet, right?

I also don't know what echoed voice does so that's why i chose Leer since it seems kind of reasonable

I would have probably chosen Leer so i can hit harder even without additional strength.

How about Blackbeard's Yami Yami no mi or Moria's Kage Kage no mi?

Hope you dont drop this novel, its good

I like what you have done with the novel so far. So no complaints from me