Lawson26

Hands down my favorite novel on this site by far. I truly hope you’ll continue this novel for a long while yet & want to thank you for giving us this masterpiece. 🙏 Keep up the amazing work.

Since she can do this isn’t she able to manipulate her own body to give herself bigger breasts?

I personally prefer one piece’s stretched out approach over Naruto’s like 60-80% Filler Episodes in the entire series approach. I just wish instead they would go more in depth into the characters a little

Asuma is Hiruzens son…..

With how perverted this MC is it doesn’t make any sense for him to not jump on the chance to cash in his V Card

Please let her be able to give them to men 😂

1 Star for no other reason than making the MC a hardcore Ripoff of Law even though he is spose to have Urahara’s Template. Not to mention he completely ignores Urahara’s Template & is a clone apperance wise of Law. All in all just reeks of lazy writing & minimal effort in creating this MC

Meh I’m already close to dropping this fic. Why bother giving him Urahara’s Template if your just gonna make him a carbon copy of Law. It just reeks of lazy writing

Why ignore Urahara he is FAR, FAR , FAR more powerful than anyone in One Piece by a wide margin