Lawson26

Yeah I’m dropping this, the name freaking Sally completely & utterly kills the story. I just can’t take it seriously with the MC spose to be some Genius Mob boss with a Dominatrix System yet is named f-ing Sally.

…..Are you kidding me!?!? Seriously what kind of idiot authors names there MC who is a Dominate Woman to the point of getting a Domiatrix System F-ing Sally! Seriously WTF

I want to see him recreate this

I just want a single fanfic where the MC quickly & ruthlessly kills Danzo.

I think the problem is not the OC it’s that it serves no point… Like why make an OC Ice release cal when there is already the Yuki clan??? It just doesn’t make any sense nor does it serve a purpose