No doubt, the author can write. However the story development and character are sooo bland, its soo boring to read. Most of the time when i read facfintions i feel excited, scenes build themselves in my head but with this fanfiction even after 117 chapters everything felt soo bland. Nothing really happens, MC has several training arcs traveling from one place to another(new world-west blue-new world-noth blue-paradise-south blue). Not to forget crew is constantly divided with 2 ships. MC also recruited animals, kids 6-14 years old. In conclusion its very boring.
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Sorry you feel that way, some others have a problem with this novel as you do and have commented the same or in a similar manner. Later the story and characters have started to develop and those that have read past a certain part are still waiting for chapter uploads now while being glad they had stuck around. I cannot speak for everyone since not everyone can be satisfied but I hope that those that have stuck around will later find enjoyment from reading this project I am still working on.
Since you claim that then i,ll read it up to latest chapter. I will shower with compliments if it really gets better.
Any improvement?
give it a chance 👍
