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OukisLips
OukisLipsLv153yr
2022-01-02 08:33

It's called "The Teacher System," but the MC doesn't really teach. He just wins gacha cards from the system and then uses them on his disciples. Not to mention that unless the student is a prodigy he just gives up on them completely. How is that "teaching?" If they're prodigies they don't need much teaching in the first place, and even if they did, just buffing them using the system is not teaching. And there's no original plot. So far the entire story is the MC's "students" tagging along with the main canon cast. The only difference is that the MC is grooming Sakura like a pedo. Other than that nothing's changed. If you're looking for a teacher in Naruto world then you'll be disappointed because the MC doesn't actually teach anybody. And if you're looking for an OC in Naruto world to shake up canon then you'll be disappointed because the MC goes out of his way to ensure canon stays intact. So there's no point in reading this story unless you've got so much free time that you're determined to read every single Naruto fanfic on this app

Naruto: The teacher system

Rysangel
4.1
183 Chs

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AshGod7
AshGod7Lv4

hahaha I lol why do you sound so true.

3yr
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TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv14

Grooming Sakura? hehehe count me in bro

3yr
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Hokonoso
HokonosoLv13

inorite? added to library!

TheLonelyGod:Grooming Sakura? hehehe count me in bro
3yr
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Darnelljoe
DarnelljoeLv14

You do you dude 🙌

TheLonelyGod:Grooming Sakura? hehehe count me in bro
3yr
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Paradise_Palace
Paradise_PalaceLv1

Bro if you don't wanna read. Stop reading. It's a story. Maybe the author does want the mc to have that behaviour. Who knows

3yr
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OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15

Who said I didn’t Stop reading?

Paradise_Palace:Bro if you don't wanna read. Stop reading. It's a story. Maybe the author does want the mc to have that behaviour. Who knows
3yr
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Federico_Medina
Federico_MedinaLv1

Ojala que si sakura ojalas junto con Ami con el mc epico

3yr
AshGod7
AshGod7Lv4

idiot why does the author post's story online because they want others to read and when he read it and gave a review some idiot like you come and be like 'don't read it if you don't like.

Paradise_Palace:Bro if you don't wanna read. Stop reading. It's a story. Maybe the author does want the mc to have that behaviour. Who knows
3yr
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Rysangel
RysangelAuthor

Thank you so much for your criticism, I'll try to learn as much as I could from your comment ^_^.

3yr
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GabrielRott
GabrielRottLv4

Everyone is free to express their opinions. And honestly, I agree with the man.

Paradise_Palace:Bro if you don't wanna read. Stop reading. It's a story. Maybe the author does want the mc to have that behaviour. Who knows
3yr
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Librarian_2023
Librarian_2023Lv4

Do you even know the point of a review?

Paradise_Palace:Bro if you don't wanna read. Stop reading. It's a story. Maybe the author does want the mc to have that behaviour. Who knows
3yr
43
Shin_Senpai
Shin_SenpaiLv11

Bruh, This is a review page. Reviews are essential.

Paradise_Palace:Bro if you don't wanna read. Stop reading. It's a story. Maybe the author does want the mc to have that behaviour. Who knows
3yr
33
Shin_Senpai
Shin_SenpaiLv11

Also this is a review.

GabrielRott:Everyone is free to express their opinions. And honestly, I agree with the man.
3yr
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LukeMorningStar
LukeMorningStarLv3

If you're saying that he gives up on students because they're not prodigies you need to seriously reread the chapters because he didn't give up on anyone.

3yr
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Selectials
SelectialsLv4

He was completely right in pedophilia. So I ask you not to pedophilia.

Rysangel:Thank you so much for your criticism, I'll try to learn as much as I could from your comment ^_^.
3yr
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Harris_Kirik
Harris_KirikLv4

He is teaching and he is also a good teacher to many students (you would have known if you continued reading the novel) This is a great novel and it does not deserve your rating or critics since they are not true. That's a fact everyone who have read this novel will see. Author has done a great job with characters, plot and the grammar 👍👍👍

3yr
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OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15

? I read all of the chapters that were available at the time of the review (around ch.25). My review is completely true based on the available chapters at the time, as evidenced by the fact that the author himself commented on this review and didn't dispute anything I stated

Harris_Kirik:He is teaching and he is also a good teacher to many students (you would have known if you continued reading the novel) This is a great novel and it does not deserve your rating or critics since they are not true. That's a fact everyone who have read this novel will see. Author has done a great job with characters, plot and the grammar 👍👍👍
3yr
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Tracz
TraczLv1

Novel without the protagonist finding love, I don't know, I feel like there's always something missing... It's no use being the strongest shinobi in the world, famous, without happiness, burdens to share. PS: Your novel é amanzing!

Rysangel:Thank you so much for your criticism, I'll try to learn as much as I could from your comment ^_^.
3yr
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Venerabe_Yun
Venerabe_YunLv3

Hahahahaha

AshGod7:hahaha I lol why do you sound so true.
3yr
Azerath
AzerathLv1

прочитай 113 главу

Harris_Kirik:He is teaching and he is also a good teacher to many students (you would have known if you continued reading the novel) This is a great novel and it does not deserve your rating or critics since they are not true. That's a fact everyone who have read this novel will see. Author has done a great job with characters, plot and the grammar 👍👍👍
3yr
Other Reviews
Demonzor
DemonzorLv14

The wasn anything’t that felt special bout this story it’ just naruto with Sakura on a different team even the mc is bland there nothing that makes you want to keep reading

3yr

funmaxwell
funmaxwellLv14

oh my God I can't stand how this story is written. it's like it's being described in detail form a first person perspective. but at the same time being narrated to us from a third person perspective. reading a story that way feels like I'm back in kindergarten and the teachers reading the storybook to me and going look kids this is how the bunny jumps or whatever you get the point I think. it feels very demeaning to read this to my intelligence.

3yr
asaade
asaadeLv10

another canon rehash, i was hype because its quite different in the start but in the end its still follow the canon, do they need to go to wave mission no its only the author following the canon for no apparent reason, should also put it in the sypnosis that this is canon rehash

3yr
AshGod7
AshGod7Lv4

How do I say it? There is no actual thing he is intended to do. The name is teacher system but it is just some noob with a system with no knowledge of teaching. Author, I have read your other books but this one wasn't good. I am not giving a hate review just saying it genuinely. There is literally nothing in it which can be considered an end goal it's just like some normal daily tag along in the naruto world.

3yr
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

Been waiting for a good teacher(action base) story since lothp. Theres been many teacher story, but only some are good and most are bad... like really bad. Then theres some that only has few chapters. This one however base on reading till chap 15, could be one of the potential good teacher novel ive been looking for. Although theres some minor scenes i dont like, but well beggar cant be chooser. Even with that i still think its this ff is good. Good pacing, good gramar ok character development, Immence read, characters dont feel dull. Soo yah. Hopefully he get more A and above rank student. Cuz i think one is not enough to have his own powerup. After all its ‘gacha’ lol

3yr
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Story was great until Adult Sauske and Boroto travel back in time, then the soul searching was so forced and such an awful way for “character development”. Honestly, if the author removes all the chapters that has the awful time travel then this would be easily a 4/5-5/5 ratings lol all of the comments are trashibg the idea because its awful. Forced and just a complete waste of time. This starts around Chapter 80 or so lol if this garbage happened earlier then i wouldnt have even bothered to waste my time reading this fanfic. This fic became pure garbage.

3yr
neobenmike
neobenmikeLv5

re-read everything again to check if some chaps got re-written since MC became a good teacher according to the new reviews. Nope, still a guy that thinks he is teaching but isn't. Still has the creep teacher vibe. Still slaps card to "teach". Still prioritizes those with high potential to teach and those that doesn't just turns into a cardboard character and forgotten, I mean they are the ones that needs a teacher to teach them the most but nope.

3yr
carlos_boral
carlos_boralLv1

The system is not helping him to teach its just making him stronger and its kinda weird that he is grooming sakura. And why sakura she is trash and useless.

3yr
Sword_1mmortal
Sword_1mmortalLv14

Used to be a 5 star but that was like at the first 1-10 chapters. Now it's just boring and uninteresting. Also the title is misleading, his system isn't really a teacher system. He just gets stronger and he uses the things he doesn't need on his students. All in all, it became average and lackluster.

3yr
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