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Personally I am a person who is into one girl type and I have seen my fare share of harem collapsing the entire story as it is very hard to deal with many romaces.And more over a single FL can allow you to flesh out more and also show out a better bond. Like if they somehow have a fight in a harem he can just avoid her and go with other girls it will show that our MC is not that great guy and all. But at the end it is your story. It is only a suggestion as most of the harem story just end up destroying itself.
I am not from your religion so I am not that knowledge about things. But you have written the fan fic very well. And btw the character I love the most is Karnan and the one I hate the most is Arjunan. So this story might just be my thing.
Poor Tom
That professor seems to be.
Lumen ann pierce the barrel girl. She is cute and also can relate with our MC
Let's be real. Mother pathway is so op and people really forget about that. As a transmigrator do the most dangerous shit and come out alive
Rip jake thoomson
Am I the only one who shipped Kat and Mc. They are so cute. I think a girl like kat would be better for our mc.
This is great.
This setting seemed more eerie than an all out war