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asaade
asaadeLv103yr
2021-12-29 10:50

another canon rehash, i was hype because its quite different in the start but in the end its still follow the canon, do they need to go to wave mission no its only the author following the canon for no apparent reason, should also put it in the sypnosis that this is canon rehash

Naruto: The teacher system

Rysangel
4.1
183 Chs

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HeavenShakingPalm9
HeavenShakingPalm9Lv5

All fanfics are a canon rehash, a true fanfic will stick to most of the original plot, while adding, emphasis on ADDING their own unique elements. Their is enough unique elements added into the story, that I find this a very interesting and entertaining fanfic. The fanfic follows the mc of this fanfiction, not the other characters. It was also explained In the beginning why he wasn't going to intentionally change major plot points, and he loves the original development of the main cast as he is a true fan. It is literally in plain view how the author wants to write the fanfic, the little details are more than enough. This is a good fanfiction. The other fanfics with major changes are "original" stories with the elements of that anime/book/movie/game running with it. like Naruto fanfics with Uzumaki Naruto having Ichigo's power, fighting hollows etc in the elemental nations. That is a alternate universe fanfiction, not a true and true fanfic. In my opinion anyways.

3yr
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asaade
asaadeLv10

Fan fiction or fanfiction (also abbreviated to fan fic, fanfic, fic or ff) is fictional writing written in an amateur capacity by fans, unauthorized by, but based on an existing work of fiction. it doesn't say it need to stay the same as canon, and also if his just copying canon whats the used of reading it when the ending is just the same as canon, I'd rather read the original since this ff doesn't add new to the plot.

HeavenShakingPalm9:All fanfics are a canon rehash, a true fanfic will stick to most of the original plot, while adding, emphasis on ADDING their own unique elements. Their is enough unique elements added into the story, that I find this a very interesting and entertaining fanfic. The fanfic follows the mc of this fanfiction, not the other characters. It was also explained In the beginning why he wasn't going to intentionally change major plot points, and he loves the original development of the main cast as he is a true fan. It is literally in plain view how the author wants to write the fanfic, the little details are more than enough. This is a good fanfiction. The other fanfics with major changes are "original" stories with the elements of that anime/book/movie/game running with it. like Naruto fanfics with Uzumaki Naruto having Ichigo's power, fighting hollows etc in the elemental nations. That is a alternate universe fanfiction, not a true and true fanfic. In my opinion anyways.
3yr
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Duncan_Bartlett_3021
Duncan_Bartlett_3021Lv4

it is perspective based, no need to change alot, just a bit and show it all differently

asaade:Fan fiction or fanfiction (also abbreviated to fan fic, fanfic, fic or ff) is fictional writing written in an amateur capacity by fans, unauthorized by, but based on an existing work of fiction. it doesn't say it need to stay the same as canon, and also if his just copying canon whats the used of reading it when the ending is just the same as canon, I'd rather read the original since this ff doesn't add new to the plot.
3yr
3
Toxic_318
Toxic_318Lv4

Well, I'm interested to read as long as the plot is different from the original. Shadowing the whole cannon plot makes me feel bored most of the time.

HeavenShakingPalm9:All fanfics are a canon rehash, a true fanfic will stick to most of the original plot, while adding, emphasis on ADDING their own unique elements. Their is enough unique elements added into the story, that I find this a very interesting and entertaining fanfic. The fanfic follows the mc of this fanfiction, not the other characters. It was also explained In the beginning why he wasn't going to intentionally change major plot points, and he loves the original development of the main cast as he is a true fan. It is literally in plain view how the author wants to write the fanfic, the little details are more than enough. This is a good fanfiction. The other fanfics with major changes are "original" stories with the elements of that anime/book/movie/game running with it. like Naruto fanfics with Uzumaki Naruto having Ichigo's power, fighting hollows etc in the elemental nations. That is a alternate universe fanfiction, not a true and true fanfic. In my opinion anyways.
3yr
6
DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

novelexpert.com/list/villain-novels go check that out if you like harem and like the type of MC with a scheming mind and an alpha along with a scheming plot development of destroying those naive protagonists and sons of luck and getting the heroines before them 😉

2yr
Procatinator
ProcatinatorLv12

Hei

2yr
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OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15

It's called "The Teacher System," but the MC doesn't really teach. He just wins gacha cards from the system and then uses them on his disciples. Not to mention that unless the student is a prodigy he just gives up on them completely. How is that "teaching?" If they're prodigies they don't need much teaching in the first place, and even if they did, just buffing them using the system is not teaching. And there's no original plot. So far the entire story is the MC's "students" tagging along with the main canon cast. The only difference is that the MC is grooming Sakura like a pedo. Other than that nothing's changed. If you're looking for a teacher in Naruto world then you'll be disappointed because the MC doesn't actually teach anybody. And if you're looking for an OC in Naruto world to shake up canon then you'll be disappointed because the MC goes out of his way to ensure canon stays intact. So there's no point in reading this story unless you've got so much free time that you're determined to read every single Naruto fanfic on this app

3yr

Demonzor
DemonzorLv14

The wasn anything’t that felt special bout this story it’ just naruto with Sakura on a different team even the mc is bland there nothing that makes you want to keep reading

3yr
funmaxwell
funmaxwellLv14

oh my God I can't stand how this story is written. it's like it's being described in detail form a first person perspective. but at the same time being narrated to us from a third person perspective. reading a story that way feels like I'm back in kindergarten and the teachers reading the storybook to me and going look kids this is how the bunny jumps or whatever you get the point I think. it feels very demeaning to read this to my intelligence.

3yr
AshGod7
AshGod7Lv4

How do I say it? There is no actual thing he is intended to do. The name is teacher system but it is just some noob with a system with no knowledge of teaching. Author, I have read your other books but this one wasn't good. I am not giving a hate review just saying it genuinely. There is literally nothing in it which can be considered an end goal it's just like some normal daily tag along in the naruto world.

3yr
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

Been waiting for a good teacher(action base) story since lothp. Theres been many teacher story, but only some are good and most are bad... like really bad. Then theres some that only has few chapters. This one however base on reading till chap 15, could be one of the potential good teacher novel ive been looking for. Although theres some minor scenes i dont like, but well beggar cant be chooser. Even with that i still think its this ff is good. Good pacing, good gramar ok character development, Immence read, characters dont feel dull. Soo yah. Hopefully he get more A and above rank student. Cuz i think one is not enough to have his own powerup. After all its ‘gacha’ lol

3yr
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Story was great until Adult Sauske and Boroto travel back in time, then the soul searching was so forced and such an awful way for “character development”. Honestly, if the author removes all the chapters that has the awful time travel then this would be easily a 4/5-5/5 ratings lol all of the comments are trashibg the idea because its awful. Forced and just a complete waste of time. This starts around Chapter 80 or so lol if this garbage happened earlier then i wouldnt have even bothered to waste my time reading this fanfic. This fic became pure garbage.

3yr
neobenmike
neobenmikeLv5

re-read everything again to check if some chaps got re-written since MC became a good teacher according to the new reviews. Nope, still a guy that thinks he is teaching but isn't. Still has the creep teacher vibe. Still slaps card to "teach". Still prioritizes those with high potential to teach and those that doesn't just turns into a cardboard character and forgotten, I mean they are the ones that needs a teacher to teach them the most but nope.

3yr
carlos_boral
carlos_boralLv1

The system is not helping him to teach its just making him stronger and its kinda weird that he is grooming sakura. And why sakura she is trash and useless.

3yr
Sword_1mmortal
Sword_1mmortalLv14

Used to be a 5 star but that was like at the first 1-10 chapters. Now it's just boring and uninteresting. Also the title is misleading, his system isn't really a teacher system. He just gets stronger and he uses the things he doesn't need on his students. All in all, it became average and lackluster.

3yr
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