Toxic_318

ninja had comms???

yeah, not exactly the greatest idea to pass out all the time. It would've been better to claim those rewards one by one over time, because honestly, with batman's paranoia, she'll have a lot of explanation to do

lol. go touch some grass

Good stuff. It absolutely pulls you in and mesmerizes you with the beauty of the story. I haven't read something like this in a while. Keep up the good work author!!!

Bruh. The first chapter, and the third hokage is acting out of character already.

tbh genius is overrated, since most authors fail to truly write out a genius character. As far as I've seen, the only place those mc's use their 'genius' is to learn things at a super fast rate (and wow the other characters)

It's a really good read, one I haven't had in a while. It has very solid writing _ it's not just about grammar and the stuff, you can tell the author's good the moment you read it. I like the characters introduced by the author and the way the story unfolds. It only has 10 chapters right now, but every chapter is pretty length, about 3 - 4 times the length of a normal chapter here in webnovel. All in all, the author have done an amazing job, and I hope he/she keeps up the great work!

Did he?

Wry? It shold be "amused". Feels like it fits the mc more.

Haaah. This is a pretty good read for me. There's not much comparison since there aren't many Arifureta fanfics out there but this one doesn't seem to be the wish-fulfillment fanfic where mc is the most handsome guy around and gets 10 billion girls. Well, at least for the time being. This fanfic has actual characters with emotions in them (yeah, this is my main judging criteria) and the plot seems to be progressing nicely. So yeah, 4.8 out of 5.