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BlackwaterLv112yr
2022-05-07 20:26

It's a pretty solid story all in all even if I'm not all that Happy with the current development. Stuff like the Art Store in the system, the real limitations and objectives of his Quest aren't really explained or very poorly. For example not once is it stated that he must publish OP in its unedited form only that he has to publish it to the end. Even than he must come up with his own ending because he doesn't know the Original ending at the time of his Death. So it stands to reason that he could have just edited the Infos of for the example little garden to protect the Giants among other things. Would also make for a more interesting story. The Publishing of Attack on Titan makes little sense and is Pretty OC for his established Character and his other works, stuff like Toriko or so would have worked better. The Quality is ok, there are a bunch of errors and sentences that sound wrong but it's nothing that would stop you from understanding anything. The biggest danger for the story is that the MC is so limited in his actions in terms of his main ability that it get pretty repetitive. He releases a new Chapter of a Manga or Anime, people go nuts, the Government reacts, a bit of filler and repeat. No editing the story's, no interesting Powers get gains, no fun stuff he gets from the Manga to teach people how to use Chakra or so. After 178 chapters of him basically only setting up shops and spreading chaos with his story's it get kinda boring to be honest.

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