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Perma_Sleep_010
Perma_Sleep_010Lv43yr
2021-12-17 09:56

This fic is actually good because the Mc is not a harem-seeking kind of guy which is kinda "rare" considering almost all the fanfic in ranking is all about harem and some of them are H*ntai world. Also writing quality is good because almost there is no grammatical error. The update is quite f*cked up(in a good way) so I will give it a 4 stars. Character design well.... His background is quite cringed but don't worry it's only half the chapter so all good. anyways that's all for now.

Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox

Wryyyyyyyy
4.7
86 Chs

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Wryyyyyyyy
WryyyyyyyyAuthor

Thanks for the review!

3yr
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Perma_Sleep_010
Perma_Sleep_010Lv4

Author this is just a random question and it's okay if you don't answer it :) 1) Are you a Filipino? 2) how old are you? Don't worry I'm not a scammer haha I just want to confirm something.

Wryyyyyyyy:Thanks for the review!
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3yr
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Wryyyyyyyy
WryyyyyyyyAuthor

1) yes 2) Well, I will disclose this. What is your guess?

Perma_Sleep_010:Author this is just a random question and it's okay if you don't answer it :) 1) Are you a Filipino? 2) how old are you? Don't worry I'm not a scammer haha I just want to confirm something.
3yr
Perma_Sleep_010
Perma_Sleep_010Lv4

errrrrr 15-16?

Wryyyyyyyy:1) yes 2) Well, I will disclose this. What is your guess?
3yr
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Spicy_Lasangua
Spicy_LasanguaLv4

It's not all harem but actually story. count me in

3yr
MAGE_OF_FLOWER
MAGE_OF_FLOWERLv5

"MC is not harem seeking" Now that make me want to read this ff

3yr
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Longshan
LongshanLv4

thanks for the comment I wouldn't have read it. MCs who don't seek harem? It was nonsense for this novel(date a live). What do I read it for? really nonsense. bye

2yr
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Wryyyyyyyy
WryyyyyyyyAuthor

Now I would advise you guys who still haven't started reading this novel to read this review. The actual review is in the comments section of this because I can't post a very long detailed review for some reason in WN. As in, it just always say error so it is what it is, I'm the one who would adjust! With that said, kindly read it there~

3yr

Wryyyyyyyy
WryyyyyyyyAuthor

Just a normal 5 star review just like many Authors in this platform do! UmU! Anyways, this would be an extension to the Q&A section part of my other review, be sure to comment down your thoughts guys and thank you very much for reading this novel!

3yr
Presto5656
Presto5656Lv3

One of the few Date a Live fanfics out there so I gotta give my support . 😀😃 😃😀😃😀

3yr
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Lazyboi
LazyboiLv4

This fic definitely has potential so i will give you my full support author-san. I myself am a harem lover so i hope to see some good romance in this fic and please for the love of every holy beings in existence don't make the mc capture girls like pokemon! I don't care if you put 1000 girls in the harem just give some development in their relationship first.

3yr
_Aoi
_AoiLv2

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Aizen_81
Aizen_81Lv1

The idea, the events, everything is good, the problem with the way you narrate the events is boring. I go down a lot and do not read most of the speech because it is boring and I do not feel any progress in words, and even the fights are boring, so whoever has long patience should read it, but whoever is upset about useless dialogues, I do not advise

3yr
Lazyboi
LazyboiLv4

You know it has been sometime since I did a review for this fic (should be my third one). This had truly gone far since the first time I had seen it. So keep up the good work author-san and pump up the chapters for us readers!😁 Also judging from the lastest chap this might be the calm before the storm type situation because war might break out next chap. So if you're reading this review then I hope you are prepared author-san, because we want our full harem and Shiori. Ps: I just realized that I got second place on your story with a fan value of 90. What's the deal with that?

3yr
SithBestDaughter
SithBestDaughterLv3

KURUMI!!!! One of the few DAL novels out there, hope that this is also good as some of your previous novels [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

3yr
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