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Lazyboi
LazyboiLv43yr
2021-12-12 18:11

This fic definitely has potential so i will give you my full support author-san. I myself am a harem lover so i hope to see some good romance in this fic and please for the love of every holy beings in existence don't make the mc capture girls like pokemon! I don't care if you put 1000 girls in the harem just give some development in their relationship first.

Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox

Wryyyyyyyy
4.7
86 Chs

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Wryyyyyyyy
WryyyyyyyyAuthor

I'll try my best to meet your expectations Honestly, I am not so sure about making a "very good" harem novel since this is the first time I am writing a novel like this and in terms of writing experience, I can say that my novels are right below average to average standards I guess Still, thanks for the review and I hope this novel will be worth you time~

3yr
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Lazyboi
LazyboiLv4

Everything have a start you know? I think you could use this fic to further enhance your writing skill by trying new things. Honestly, a good harem for me is to see the bonds created between characters and how strong they could become throughout the story. Also one of the essential part of a good harem i think is the growth of the mc in the story, of how he could become someone better than his past self. He didn't have a chance to experience any good things in his previous life, so i would love to see his journey as a person in the Date a live world.

Wryyyyyyyy:I'll try my best to meet your expectations Honestly, I am not so sure about making a "very good" harem novel since this is the first time I am writing a novel like this and in terms of writing experience, I can say that my novels are right below average to average standards I guess Still, thanks for the review and I hope this novel will be worth you time~
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Spicy_Lasangua
Spicy_LasanguaLv4

#noharem plz

Lazyboi:Everything have a start you know? I think you could use this fic to further enhance your writing skill by trying new things. Honestly, a good harem for me is to see the bonds created between characters and how strong they could become throughout the story. Also one of the essential part of a good harem i think is the growth of the mc in the story, of how he could become someone better than his past self. He didn't have a chance to experience any good things in his previous life, so i would love to see his journey as a person in the Date a live world.
3yr
Lazyboi
LazyboiLv4

#fullharem You're too late for that my friend.

Spicy_Lasangua:#noharem plz
3yr
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Spicy_Lasangua
Spicy_LasanguaLv4

Lazyboi:#fullharem You're too late for that my friend.
3yr
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Wryyyyyyyy
WryyyyyyyyAuthor

Now I would advise you guys who still haven't started reading this novel to read this review. The actual review is in the comments section of this because I can't post a very long detailed review for some reason in WN. As in, it just always say error so it is what it is, I'm the one who would adjust! With that said, kindly read it there~

2yr

Wryyyyyyyy
WryyyyyyyyAuthor

Just a normal 5 star review just like many Authors in this platform do! UmU! Anyways, this would be an extension to the Q&A section part of my other review, be sure to comment down your thoughts guys and thank you very much for reading this novel!

2yr
Presto5656
Presto5656Lv3

One of the few Date a Live fanfics out there so I gotta give my support . 😀😃 😃😀😃😀

3yr
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Perma_Sleep_010
Perma_Sleep_010Lv4

This fic is actually good because the Mc is not a harem-seeking kind of guy which is kinda "rare" considering almost all the fanfic in ranking is all about harem and some of them are H*ntai world. Also writing quality is good because almost there is no grammatical error. The update is quite f*cked up(in a good way) so I will give it a 4 stars. Character design well.... His background is quite cringed but don't worry it's only half the chapter so all good. anyways that's all for now.

3yr
_Aoi
_AoiLv2

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Aizen_81
Aizen_81Lv1

The idea, the events, everything is good, the problem with the way you narrate the events is boring. I go down a lot and do not read most of the speech because it is boring and I do not feel any progress in words, and even the fights are boring, so whoever has long patience should read it, but whoever is upset about useless dialogues, I do not advise

3yr
Lazyboi
LazyboiLv4

You know it has been sometime since I did a review for this fic (should be my third one). This had truly gone far since the first time I had seen it. So keep up the good work author-san and pump up the chapters for us readers!😁 Also judging from the lastest chap this might be the calm before the storm type situation because war might break out next chap. So if you're reading this review then I hope you are prepared author-san, because we want our full harem and Shiori. Ps: I just realized that I got second place on your story with a fan value of 90. What's the deal with that?

2yr
SithBestDaughter
SithBestDaughterLv3

KURUMI!!!! One of the few DAL novels out there, hope that this is also good as some of your previous novels [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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