Like I said before, I'll give another review when the fix progresses, so here I am. Writing Quality - 5/5 Grammar's good like what I said in my 1st review. Also, the author writes the POV of other characters and not just the protagonist's which I liked. Story Development - 4/5 I won't go into detail, but I'm liking where it's going after I posted my first review. Character Design - 3/5 Nothing changed. Updating Stability - 3/5 2 chaps a week is alright, I guess. World Background - 3/5 I was expecting a pure DAL story with the MC just going around other universes to go sightseeing or something. What made me rate it lower than my 1st review was the author added FGO elements, which was for me, unnecessary. The MC's going to other worlds anyway, what's the point of adding FGO elements? Could have just made him go to Nasuverse or smth. Overall, the fic's good. Sadly, I'll be ending my journey here. Adding in unnecessary stuff like fgo elements didn't fit well with me. Don't get me wrong, the fate series is one of my favorites, but I expected a pure DAL fic. In the future, I won't even be surprised if you write some bs like 'Since servants in fate are basically spirits turned into familiars, couldn't the MC make spirits like Tohka or Kurumi his servants?' or something like that.
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I feel you bruv, in my head I thought he would be summoned as a servant or something, maybe as a grand foreigner or maybe just get tangled with some of zelretch's sheninegans, the mc being a spirit would have opened up so many opportunities to get introduced into the nasuverse but the author just butchered it I really wanted him to go to the Fate universe and meet the almighty king of mongrels but I can't bear to continue with the way he executed it ugh
