The story might be good for other readers but not for me, what make me dropped this is that the MC just do and say whatever he wants(like crippling someone) as if he was a lord or something, he doesn't even think of consequences and the Author's excuse is cuz he's a CRAZY monster 🤷♂️ What made me dropped this more is the MC wasn't even Rimuru Tempest, not even his personality, the Author clearly just used Tensura's name, great Sage and some characters, for the clicks, it's just one of those CN fanfics where the mc got to Ninja World, got system, get skills, Do academy (well they time skipped it and got to the accepting mission thing already), mc also questioned why would Naruto only cares about the death's of the one he cared and called it hypocrisy like whaaat? like is it bad to not care about the death of your friend's mother but care about your friend's death like wth!? also his goal isn't even told or does he even have one? like he killed all those people, gained magical skill in a ninja world, and got strong for what???
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LIKEtruth to be spoken, if I wanted to use an anime name 'for the clicks' ir would definitely not be tensura many people don't like this mc, me included, but I really didn't plan him to be a good mc (in writing quality sense) mostly, thid fic is a writing experience, where I am testing some ideas let's also get technical, Great Sage is not a tensura character, it's a skill and as such is not unique to rimuru tempest, the mc having the rimuru name has a in fic reason, and he being... a jerk... it's kinda of the thing I was going for here, yet there really isn't a giid way of explaining it in fic without it being that he's crazy bad writing? oh, most definitely, I'm still learning a lot of stuff 'for the clicks'? now that is wrong, or else I would have made a system harem gotta catch em all fic with multiversal trasnmigration, because those abominations of fics are very popular with the kids nowadays anyway, since this fic isn't for you let me recomend you some if you like serious fics, I can recommend you Naruto: Uzumaki Emperor Let the world feel pain reborn in the Narutoverse reborn in naruto with the tenseigan and if you like comedy ones most definitely Goddes of Ice reborn as Naruto's twin sister Naruto reborn with talent [img=recommend]