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Plothoel
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2022-06-05 21:58

My problem with this story is only the mc, doing villain thing for the sake of villain or 'power' are pretty hollow to me. Itachi, light yagami and even thanos are great villain because they have motive and greater purpose on why they do what they do. But so far this mc is just doing something evil because he can. He probably had already conquer his previous world (tensuru?) and become God to be able to travel to naruto verse. For what purpose? Power? Naruto verse are backwaters in power level compare to his previous world. Sentimentality? He just kill main cast characters with no thought or remorse whatsoever.

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Joao132135
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I know it's hard to read all the paragraph comments since most of them are not serious stuff, but I'm pretty sure in at least 5 of them I have said this is not Rimuru from Tensura, it's an OC with his name the mc being evil, is intended his reason for so, is honestly not even a good one, he is mentally unstable and that's the point If I tried to make him have some good reason behind his acts, it wouldn't end well for I have no real experience writing that, but expect some changes on him after a while also, thanks for the review You don't know how infuriating negative reviews tgat don't point out the mistakes like your did, are

Akame_Vermillion
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Ho What a nice kid its just you who believes that they are great villain because you like them and sympathies with them because their goals validate your thinking process who are you to decide what makes a great villain like even giving them villain would even shame villain are supposed to evil can’t u understand such a simple fact with that tiny little peanut brain of urs

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