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Benw8888
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2022-01-26 04:09

The MC makes some annoying choices, leaving clues that would unravel their secret identity for no purpose. For example, chunin exam fights have no benefit to her as she doesnt care about Konoha, so she has no reason to use abilities she shouldnt have during it… Also she antagonizes some people for no reason- it’s clear she’s crazy and irrational. Besides that, though, the concept of this story was amazing and I loved reading it!

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Joao132135
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uh, that was the whole point... the mc IS crazy, I have shown it more than once, it also is somewhat dumb and will only get better later anyway, thanks for the review

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