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Mithren
MithrenLv133yr
2022-04-09 09:15

If you've nothing better to do you could give it a read but don't expect a well written story. The MC is OP to the point that nothing matters. The story basically consists of the MC just leveling up so fast that the reader will get whiplash. There is no suspense or meaning to the story. There is just the slightest hint that an actual story might be in this novel in the 20th chapter but I don't know if that'll hold true or is just an accident on the authors part. The world, system, and other characters could be interesting if the author took the time to actually think about them but they are glossed over for the most part.

I Have 10 Training Avatars

Flying Jade Dragon 3,000,000
3.5
396 Chs

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ImProcrastinating
ImProcrastinatingLv12

THE GERMINAL ORGANIZATION??? [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

3yr

Yuki_Yato
Yuki_YatoLv12

From chapter 171 onwards it's straight up unreadable, the translation quality took a deep plunge into the abyss, it's no different from mtl now.

2yr
Tigrallef
TigrallefLv4

Raw: 我有十个历练分身 Author: 飞起玉龙三百万 Status: Completed, 241 chapters. I've completed reading the raws, and while he hurried the end I liked it. Not many novels have the greatest of endings, especially new authors. His new novel is: 我在神诡世界挂机成圣, roughly translated by google is "I Hang up and become Sanctified in the Mysterious". It's updated twice daily and at chapter 36 as of writing this. MC has 1 single training clone but it's a very different type than the first novel. It's set in a world where humanity has a fairly weak hold on their villages, and even a town of 3000 can just be wiped out in a night by monsters.

3yr
LazyCorpz
LazyCorpzLv12

Too generic. World building? Just invent things as you go on. MC is also a typical chinese MC. Hide my power. Blend in the crowd. No thoughts about not being a slave. He just goes on with flow. Its an afk wish fulfilment novel where MC is the only one with 2 braincells. Rest of them have only 1.

3yr
Panime219
Panime219Lv13

I like the story and all but translation went downhill starting in ch 171.I like the story and all but translation went downhill starting in ch 171.

2yr
silverlightning
silverlightningLv6

At chapter 170, the quality of translation takes a nosedive. Worse than machine translation. The entire chapter is a single paragraph, names change constantly within the chapter. Unreadable garbage.

2yr
door123
door123Lv5

The book quite literally broke its rules in the first ten chapters. The main character is suppo to be a slave of an organization and have a collar that detects the items they coll from killing enemies yet when he kills a bunch of bosses and gets a lot of loot the collar detects nothing

3yr
Demoniitrus
DemoniitrusLv5

Translation becomes machine translated starting at chapter 170. Do not recommend reading until its fixed to normal translation. A pity. It was a nice novel before that. Will Review as 1 star to shame this decisivo. Would otherwise be around 4 stars.

2yr
Basgorm
BasgormLv5

I would like to give this story 4* but they just started posting nearly unedited MTLs as chapters without even bothering to lookup translation continuity. This is a translation publishing business that doesn't even bother trying to translate their stories.

2yr
ZakesDee
ZakesDeeLv3

all I can is.. if you don't like an MC that has a one track brain cell then don't bother. This is one is a full copy paste cliché with an MC thats got a serious fetish for standing and receiving a beating and the enemies all don't have brain cells. They only live to give away free material, and increase MCs strength. or rather he's defense so he can receive more beatings .

3yr
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