Mithren
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Mithren2dCommentedwell after hundreds of years nature would have processed all that. it's essentially a cave at this point
In the middle of the passage was a waterway, the surface of the water very still, and the quality of the water was surprisingly clear, vastly different from what he knew of sewer water.- Mithren2dCommented
time travel is vastly different than transmigrating... but who knows this time maybe it's actually time travel
He had traveled through time. - Mithren4dCommented
Matchmaking... highly qualified female teacher/artist. I wonder what he might be missing
Zhou Ning was dumbfounded. Since when had his uncle become so impatient? He felt like he might be missing something but shook his head and didn't think any further. His brain cells had been seriously depleted these past few days. Time to pack up and go home to sleep. - Mithren7dReplied to yavier
I don't speak that language. Please be respectful enough to reply in the same language.
The eagle, diving toward the drone, was struck by the Pea Bullets and experienced intense pain. More Pea Bullets hit the eagle in succession, causing it to screech and lose some feathers. Realizing it was outmatched, the eagle cried out sharply, abandoned its attack on the Drone, and fled. - Mithren9dCommented
Smoking is stupid."Smoking for fun" indicates a severe ignorance or stupidity.
Zhou Ning exhaled deeply, noticing half a pack of Su cigarettes on Doctor Liu's desk. He took one out and lit it up. He wasn't much of a smoker and had started smoking just for fun, but at this moment, he really needed a bit of mental relaxation. - Mithren9dCommented
I thought there were three skid marks and only two checked... maybe I missed something
"Both admitted to illegal racing on the Northern Outer Ring Road, betting on who would win Su Manli. The loser would back out. Neither, however, confessed to hitting anyone. - Mithren9dCommented
lol. -2
Forensic Doctor Level: -2 - Mithren10dCommented
*Shop not show
"Show Owner Jun, wait a minute!" It was little Wei, whom Jun had not seen for a while. - Mithren10dCommented
That herb selling kid would be a good choice. Sure he'll have to wait for a return on investment but it's a good choice
Jun acquired this talent scroll recently and planned to use it to recruit an alchemist for himself. - Mithren10dCommented
missing a word here
Many Qi Condensation Realm cultivators have to for many years just to be able to afford it. - Mithren10dCommented
A price of tokens. Does this mean it's a talent he can buy and then sell?
[Sword Dao Talent (mortal grade high-level): Sword dao aptitude increases by three times. Sword type techniques comprehension increases by 50%. After absorbing this talent, anyone will be able to reach the level of a sword cultivator. (Enhanceable) (Price: 40 tokens)] - Mithren11dReplied to Moon_The_Femboy
My comment is still valid regardless of the points you put forth. It is redundant. Efforts to clean up, proof read, and otherwise improve the presentation of the story makes the read more enjoyable for the readers and helps the story do well. I however wonder if you're possibly an internet troll as you've kindly demanded that I "sush up" and otherwise attempted to invalidate my opinion. Should you be a troll I ask you attack with great creativity and fever as I'm a bit bored and welcome the distraction. In the off chance you truly meant no offense I'm game for civil discourse
Chapter 2: Archer (2) - Mithren11dReplied to Jacob_Kerner
That's true when walking. The author has it running. A bears hips and supporting musculature are not designed for bipedal movement and thus makes such movement clumsy and less powerful.
The Black Bear was truly frightened of the human's cunning, to the point it turned and ran.detailImmortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat pointsEastern · Smoke Painted - Mithren14dReplied to Kingspence999
The guy did end up following up with a comment that he was trying to do sarcasm and meant nothing negative. I think he was aiming for funny/sarcastic but missed the mark. But yeah. Many people seem too eager to make their 'bit' that they fail to take the time to think things all the way through. I myself am occasionally guilty of this as well even though I try to avoid doing so.
Exp- 4/20 - Mithren14dCommented
bears can't run on two legs
Although it was down to two legs, its fleeing speed was still astonishingly fast.detailImmortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat pointsEastern · Smoke Painted - Mithren14dCommented
it can't run with two limbs
The Black Bear was truly frightened of the human's cunning, to the point it turned and ran.detailImmortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat pointsEastern · Smoke Painted - Mithren20dCommented
Math isn't 'that' difficult
To be honest, when Yan Fei saw the extra 20 million cash in his bank account, he felt dizzy and could hardly believe that he had become a multimillionaire overnight. Once the demolition was completed, he would immediately receive the remaining 80 million in balance, becoming a true billionaire. Others might not earn so much money in their entire lives, but he had obtained it effortlessly, and aside from thanking his parents, he had no other thoughts. - Mithren20dCommented
Eagle's don't hunt at night. Owls do
The eagle, diving toward the drone, was struck by the Pea Bullets and experienced intense pain. More Pea Bullets hit the eagle in succession, causing it to screech and lose some feathers. Realizing it was outmatched, the eagle cried out sharply, abandoned its attack on the Drone, and fled. - Mithren20dCommented
So at most an hour a day. Seems too limited to me but does give room to grow
Of course, if the flight wasn't operating at such a high intensity and the speed was reduced, the drone's flight duration would extend appropriately but definitely not exceeding 1 hour. Once the Energy Points were depleted, the Drone Avatar would enter standby mode, unable to operate further until the Energy Points naturally recharged. - Mithren20dCommented
I dislike that. In my opinion it'd be better if he actually charged it. like through physical contact or with some kind of cost
Energy resembled the drone's battery power, representing its range and operational capabilities. Flying and other actions would consume energy, and if the energy points were to be depleted, the drone would enter standby mode, unable to perform any operations. Energy points would automatically restore to 100% at midnight every day.