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LazyCorpz
LazyCorpzLv123yr
2022-04-10 10:59

Too generic. World building? Just invent things as you go on. MC is also a typical chinese MC. Hide my power. Blend in the crowd. No thoughts about not being a slave. He just goes on with flow. Its an afk wish fulfilment novel where MC is the only one with 2 braincells. Rest of them have only 1.

I Have 10 Training Avatars

Flying Jade Dragon 3,000,000
3.5
396 Chs

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DaPashini
DaPashiniLv10

Are you stupid? He is not a slave. In addition unlike other stupid Chinese mc, he is not a simp and he is not “forced” to reveal his disguise.

3yr
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LazyCorpz
LazyCorpzLv12

Him being a slave is mentioned in the first chapter itself.

DaPashini:Are you stupid? He is not a slave. In addition unlike other stupid Chinese mc, he is not a simp and he is not “forced” to reveal his disguise.
3yr
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DaPashini
DaPashiniLv10

If you read later, he changes that

LazyCorpz:Him being a slave is mentioned in the first chapter itself.
3yr
1
Gluttonyimsi
GluttonyimsiLv13

Well although the term used is slave its more like a job with bad conditions they are expected to give some stuff from realms and get a dorm room/very low amount of pay and its also explained in later chapters People not working for the organization cannot enter higher realms so it is a smart choice in my opinion. Its not like a slave if you cant fill your quota for 3 times they kick you out they dont even kill you

2yr
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HydroNL
HydroNLLv10

If they kick you how are you supposed to survive?

Gluttonyimsi:Well although the term used is slave its more like a job with bad conditions they are expected to give some stuff from realms and get a dorm room/very low amount of pay and its also explained in later chapters People not working for the organization cannot enter higher realms so it is a smart choice in my opinion. Its not like a slave if you cant fill your quota for 3 times they kick you out they dont even kill you
2yr
1
OpenAir
OpenAirLv3

With those conditions? Their pretty much slaves. Ain’t no difference besides them getting paid but otherwise, everything they work hard for is taken away while they get the rubble. They get paid measly. And they are pretty much killed after three failures. Slaves.

Gluttonyimsi:Well although the term used is slave its more like a job with bad conditions they are expected to give some stuff from realms and get a dorm room/very low amount of pay and its also explained in later chapters People not working for the organization cannot enter higher realms so it is a smart choice in my opinion. Its not like a slave if you cant fill your quota for 3 times they kick you out they dont even kill you
2yr
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ImProcrastinating
ImProcrastinatingLv12

THE GERMINAL ORGANIZATION??? [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

3yr

Yuki_Yato
Yuki_YatoLv12

From chapter 171 onwards it's straight up unreadable, the translation quality took a deep plunge into the abyss, it's no different from mtl now.

2yr
Tigrallef
TigrallefLv4

Raw: 我有十个历练分身 Author: 飞起玉龙三百万 Status: Completed, 241 chapters. I've completed reading the raws, and while he hurried the end I liked it. Not many novels have the greatest of endings, especially new authors. His new novel is: 我在神诡世界挂机成圣, roughly translated by google is "I Hang up and become Sanctified in the Mysterious". It's updated twice daily and at chapter 36 as of writing this. MC has 1 single training clone but it's a very different type than the first novel. It's set in a world where humanity has a fairly weak hold on their villages, and even a town of 3000 can just be wiped out in a night by monsters.

3yr
Panime219
Panime219Lv13

I like the story and all but translation went downhill starting in ch 171.I like the story and all but translation went downhill starting in ch 171.

2yr
silverlightning
silverlightningLv6

At chapter 170, the quality of translation takes a nosedive. Worse than machine translation. The entire chapter is a single paragraph, names change constantly within the chapter. Unreadable garbage.

2yr
door123
door123Lv5

The book quite literally broke its rules in the first ten chapters. The main character is suppo to be a slave of an organization and have a collar that detects the items they coll from killing enemies yet when he kills a bunch of bosses and gets a lot of loot the collar detects nothing

3yr
Demoniitrus
DemoniitrusLv5

Translation becomes machine translated starting at chapter 170. Do not recommend reading until its fixed to normal translation. A pity. It was a nice novel before that. Will Review as 1 star to shame this decisivo. Would otherwise be around 4 stars.

2yr
Basgorm
BasgormLv5

I would like to give this story 4* but they just started posting nearly unedited MTLs as chapters without even bothering to lookup translation continuity. This is a translation publishing business that doesn't even bother trying to translate their stories.

2yr
ZakesDee
ZakesDeeLv3

all I can is.. if you don't like an MC that has a one track brain cell then don't bother. This is one is a full copy paste cliché with an MC thats got a serious fetish for standing and receiving a beating and the enemies all don't have brain cells. They only live to give away free material, and increase MCs strength. or rather he's defense so he can receive more beatings .

3yr
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