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LomyrilLv153yr
2022-01-05 03:47

I liked it up to a point. Some things about the novel I just skipped over and said, "ok". Like how even with two lifetimes he lets people walk over him. Or that losing his old family was so traumatic, but things going on with his new family make him just take a hit and then he keeps going down his path without being emotionally affected. The point I had to leave was soon after he got certain powers. He went to investigate people who were killed and ended up going and doing some nonsensical things. I can suspend disbelief for a good story but I feel things just went too far. I will be dropping the story.

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AlphachoasAuthor

Sorry to see you go! I understand this arc is quite nonsensical at the moment but it is needed for what I have planned. Regardless thank you for reading I appreciate it.

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