Lomyril

I like the chapter but it is definitely out of order in the story.

The story was good up until about chapter 105. That's when the author seemed to want to use this story as a draft. And what makes it worse is that some of the chapters have no relation to Max's story. Later, there were some chapters that were repetitive. Because of this strange behavior, I have to drop the story.

Well you can always repeat the gala scene where in the spider-verse movie Peter offers Mary Jane all the bread she could ever want..

I'm very glad to see the chapter where they play around and have a bit of fun on the moon. Thanks for that!

I do like all of the reactions but I feel that because they are in shock they are missing something. The people need to experiment with the low gravity on the moon. I can see them going back into the shuttle Bay and turning off the magnetic boots just to see how high they can jump or how far they can leap. I can see them going back to the cafeteria to try out foods where they push it up into the air and then Lean Forward like the astronauts do and capture the food that's floating.

One small step for man, one giant leap for mankind.

Still nothing to see here folks. Move along. Move along.

I hope he will give her a bracelet as well. This almost seems like a trick. He could pass off the bracelet as some sort of security feature that allows people into his shelter.

The only thing I think might be missing would be communication protocols between the ship and Air traffic control. In other words, how would they address the shuttle? "This is Nova flight 001 on approach." There should be some sort of call sign to help identify who air traffic control is talking to.