Lomyril
“The Sky is not the limit to Mastery, for (as any science fiction enthusiast can tell you) there are infinite worlds left to explore once the sky is left behind." - Role Playing Mastery, by Gary Gygax
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Lomyril3h agoCommentedEverything seems fine so far.
- Lomyril2d agoCommented
I can't see Diana saying "Shitty". Flippant may work instead.
- Lomyril7d agoCommented
I think you mean first.
- Lomyril24d agoCommented
this chapter is out of order
- Lomyrila month agoCommented
this should be the first sequence not the zero sequence
- Lomyril2 months agoCommented
another chapter out of order
- Lomyril3 months agoCommented
an excellent chapter that provides interesting analysis
- Lomyril3 months agoCommented
I like the chapter but it is definitely out of order in the story.
- Lomyril4 months agoPosted
The story was good up until about chapter 105. That's when the author seemed to want to use this story as a draft. And what makes it worse is that some of the chapters have no relation to Max's story. Later, there were some chapters that were repetitive. Because of this strange behavior, I have to drop the story.
- Lomyril5 months agoCommented
Well you can always repeat the gala scene where in the spider-verse movie Peter offers Mary Jane all the bread she could ever want..