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IWantACheatToo
IWantACheatTooLv133yr
2022-01-19 00:07

Sigh, i wish I don't have to write a review since I'm totally bad at writing, not to mention English is my 3rd language and I've never took any courses. So pardon my grammar. As you can see from my username, i like reading stories with OP protagonist, sadly a lot of it is just BAD.. Inconsistent numbers and stories, illogical decisions, negative IQ of the MCs, black hole of a plot hole, and many other things. So when i stumbled upon this book, I'm only interested with its title, since this is the first time I've seen lv 2M. But as i read it, i haven't seen any glaring plot holes, the writing is also quite decent, bar the occasional typo and some grammar mistakes. Some people may said that the plot is getting inconsistent at around ch20+, but i beg to differ. It's not inconsistent, everything will make sense in later chapters, and i dare say that even veteran reader can get blindsided by this one plot twist.. Well, the twists actually, but other than one particular plot twist, you can still almost get it right from the details scattered in the story and paragraph comments. That said though, there're some moments that I'd say rather forced, since it shouldn't happen normally, but it can still be reasoned with.. All in all, this book is quite good and I recommend you guys to stick with it until around ch40. Keep up the good work author!

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lalallalalalalalalLv3

True. If you think too hard your f*cked.

Ikta_Solork
Ikta_SolorkLv10

Bro can you recommend me a good novel with op mc preferably a cheat.

GHOST_SABER
GHOST_SABERLv3

if you wished why didn't you stop writing the review, I read your review and started reading it and now I have wasted half a day reading dumb plots that never made sense as many time you rereadit

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