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What are you trying to do, you made this rog story..... When Peter was bitten by spider his strength increased to 10 ton directly and later it was at 30 ton but there is no change in stats, his strength, speed, dexterity etc all parameters should have increased but he remained weak.....
Incomplete System in Marvel
Chaostic
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Seriously like everyone said this is a spiderman fic sure the mc isn't originally Peter but the spider that bit him isn't some dude who reincarnated as that spider and could control whether the person he bit gets power or not, it's the same spider but for some reason the mc practically didn't get enhanced like he's supposed to be which means that spider scene was totally unnecessary because it didn't change him at all it could've been a fic where Peter gets spider power's and gets more stronger than the original using the system and if you think that's gonna make it some wishfulfillment fic then you should research marvel because thanos isn't the strongest villian and spider man isn't nowhere near thanos.
You should search strength of marvel hero's on wiki you will get idea, some time ago I was trying to write fanfic so I searched on wiki...... Just search power levels of marvel superheros on Google you will get info.....
Chaostic:10 ton? The 10 represents the points in it with 10 being the average for a normal human so around 60 kg. He is nowhere near 10 tons or even 30 tons.
I know how strong they all are in the comics its just that Im not following that but basing stats more off of the webtoon 'The Gamer' since thats what most gaming systems are based off of
SORCERERSUPREME_7:You should search strength of marvel hero's on wiki you will get idea, some time ago I was trying to write fanfic so I searched on wiki...... Just search power levels of marvel superheros on Google you will get info.....
Chaostic:I know how strong they all are in the comics its just that Im not following that but basing stats more off of the webtoon 'The Gamer' since thats what most gaming systems are based off of
Chaostic:10 ton? The 10 represents the points in it with 10 being the average for a normal human so around 60 kg. He is nowhere near 10 tons or even 30 tons.
What’s the point of being bitten then? Your making your mc super weak for no reason, don’t make your mc Peter Parker/Spiderman if your not gonna give him the Powers that Spiderman should and usually would have.
Chaostic:10 ton? The 10 represents the points in it with 10 being the average for a normal human so around 60 kg. He is nowhere near 10 tons or even 30 tons.
Yea, that was disappointing and pointless plot. Might as well done him a different character, instead he got a quest to get the spider bite and then.... nothing. It's just so stupid and pointless. Spider-Man with normal bite still has methods to become beyond OP (some of the comic version) yet this with a system gets it worse.... why write about a system then? Why Spider Man?
Bro, that's.... Terrible nerf for mc himself. For some reason it felt like the spider biting him was like an ordinary spider. It only sends poison, it makes us feverish, after that we heal or die, if it heals it's like humans in general nothing changes (maybe except for being able to have trauma to spiders).
Chaostic:10 ton? The 10 represents the points in it with 10 being the average for a normal human so around 60 kg. He is nowhere near 10 tons or even 30 tons.
I really do not know what they are complaining about, I prefer this to having the spider powers and can defeat each and every one of the villains in a group or separately until a Loki, Ultron and Thanos type villain comes out who are powerful or have his armies, if I gave him all the powers of spider man this would simply be a wish fulfillment fic and that's it, without plot or any character development either secondary or main (Google Traductor)
Well, that's the point dummy (AKA author in disguise), if you want him to have slow development so that his character will be more defined and not turn into a dumb wish fulfillment routine, you shouldn't had him bit by the spider that gave spidermans abilities in first place. But no, you did, and worse it was nerfed, and it felt like eating a SCAM fake china food. Ugh
Spider_Man_Morales:I really do not know what they are complaining about, I prefer this to having the spider powers and can defeat each and every one of the villains in a group or separately until a Loki, Ultron and Thanos type villain comes out who are powerful or have his armies, if I gave him all the powers of spider man this would simply be a wish fulfillment fic and that's it, without plot or any character development either secondary or main (Google Traductor)
If he wasn’t Peter Parker there wouldn’t be expectations. That is the problem, author has him as someone with serious actual potential with the spider bite but nerfs them for his stories development. If mc was someone else and lets say the original spider powered of this verse is Spider Gwen then ok while mc is cheating some small power from the destiny web he didn’t get op because he isn’t the spider totem. But the problem is he is Peter Parker a existence that is entricately tied to the destiny web as a strong spider totem if bit…
Spider_Man_Morales:I really do not know what they are complaining about, I prefer this to having the spider powers and can defeat each and every one of the villains in a group or separately until a Loki, Ultron and Thanos type villain comes out who are powerful or have his armies, if I gave him all the powers of spider man this would simply be a wish fulfillment fic and that's it, without plot or any character development either secondary or main (Google Traductor)
If he wasn’t Peter Parker there wouldn’t be expectations. That is the problem, you have him as someone with serious actual potential with the spider bite but nerfs them for your stories development. If mc was someone else and lets say the original spider powered of this verse is Spider Gwen then ok while mc is cheating some small power from the destiny web he didn’t get op because he isn’t the spider totem. But the problem is he is Peter Parker, he is an existence that is entricately tied to the destiny web as a strong spider totem if bitten…
Chaostic:I know how strong they all are in the comics its just that Im not following that but basing stats more off of the webtoon 'The Gamer' since thats what most gaming systems are based off of
You are a mental disortet persone i hope a doctor can help you he has an incomplete systeam how the holy F… can he gets stronger when you are macking him weaker why did you macke the mc get biten in first place von a radioaktive spider ??? Macke no sense i can‘t unterstand how somebody can read this thing ugh
Chaostic:I know how strong they all are in the comics its just that Im not following that but basing stats more off of the webtoon 'The Gamer' since thats what most gaming systems are based off of
The point is that the spider carried a super serum that was meant to create Soldiers that could function at levels above Olympic athletes. Peter's physique is no longer completely human after the bite. In fact, Captain America and Spiderman can be considered to have physiques closer to Aesir than humans. Thor, spiderman, and captain America in the movies can send people flying with a single hit. So to have no change is ridiculous in any respect to a Spiderman Fan.
Chaostic:10 ton? The 10 represents the points in it with 10 being the average for a normal human so around 60 kg. He is nowhere near 10 tons or even 30 tons.