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Newnoob
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2021-11-27 10:27

Well I don't need to read it, to judge the story. Monkey is a phenomenal writer, a bonafide perfectionist, a man of quality, even if he writes trash(lol) than I'll still read it. Trust me if your a regular here than you know what you'll get, but if you're new than I would suggest you to go and read his other stories, I guarantee it you'll not regret it.

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He is indeed

Touji_san
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Well, hes indeed a good writer, i just whished he make different kinds of Mc, they are always have more or less the same personalities. But, the rest is cool, i guess, romance is top notch, comedy is nice, action is, well, what you would expect from a fanfic, its hard to make a engaging fight scene, even then, he makes great ones. For last, he sometimes make his Mc a bit arrogant and cold towards some characters for no reasonable reason or, no reason at all, and thats a turn off, fells like Author-san is inposing his own negative impressions in them, i dont know, maybe i am thinking too much, but i still love your works Sensei!

Newnoob
NewnoobLv4

Yeah I get it, but I think it's hard to make MC's that are different from their norm style, even author like HolyJoker and Cornbringer make their MC's the same. In joker's case they are always cold and somewhat calculative or manipulative. Cornbringer though tries( as far as I think) to diversify his MC's but the MCs always ends up being calculative or manipulative or loving towards his family, still that's my thought so NO OFFENSE guys. So yeah I'm not a writer but I think that either they try to make MC's different or its just us that love this type of character, so they maintain the style of their writing for US ( again this is just my thought I don't know whether it's offensive or not in anyway but if it is than I'm sorry)

Touji_san:Well, hes indeed a good writer, i just whished he make different kinds of Mc, they are always have more or less the same personalities. But, the rest is cool, i guess, romance is top notch, comedy is nice, action is, well, what you would expect from a fanfic, its hard to make a engaging fight scene, even then, he makes great ones. For last, he sometimes make his Mc a bit arrogant and cold towards some characters for no reasonable reason or, no reason at all, and thats a turn off, fells like Author-san is inposing his own negative impressions in them, i dont know, maybe i am thinking too much, but i still love your works Sensei!
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Touji_san
Touji_sanLv4

Agreed. It really is difficult to create differente main characters, you're right my man. I was just thinking out loud, sorry for anything as well.

Newnoob:Yeah I get it, but I think it's hard to make MC's that are different from their norm style, even author like HolyJoker and Cornbringer make their MC's the same. In joker's case they are always cold and somewhat calculative or manipulative. Cornbringer though tries( as far as I think) to diversify his MC's but the MCs always ends up being calculative or manipulative or loving towards his family, still that's my thought so NO OFFENSE guys. So yeah I'm not a writer but I think that either they try to make MC's different or its just us that love this type of character, so they maintain the style of their writing for US ( again this is just my thought I don't know whether it's offensive or not in anyway but if it is than I'm sorry)
Newnoob
NewnoobLv4

Its okay dude 😇😊

Touji_san:Agreed. It really is difficult to create differente main characters, you're right my man. I was just thinking out loud, sorry for anything as well.
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