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CyberGhost
CyberGhostLv153yr
2021-12-23 10:56

Good story! I’m at chapter 67 now, and really like the story so far. The mc is fleshed out and the character interaction is excellent. The story development is good too. I’m curious how the story wil develop with the mc involvement. Keep up the good work author!

Price of Freedom- Remastered

Monkey_Godking
4.4
103 Chs

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Underwaterflame
UnderwaterflameLv14

Writing quality is good, formating is a bit off like dialougue but its not unreadable. Main problems are forced plot points and power scaling. The MC before meeting Luffy is consistently beating the strongest slaves in Mary Geoise and is muscled and very strong. Yet In the next arc he gets tripped by normal people and kicked by Nezumi. He can catch bullets but wood cuts him? Also the insane amount of abuse makes no sense for one peice. He is in East Blue- ShoulD be the strongest by a large margin and is basically a doormat until the plot requires him. As far as i have read it is a rehash of cannon with a useless MC.

3yr

NecroticSimulacrum
NecroticSimulacrumLv5

Welcome back monkey

3yr
Newnoob
NewnoobLv4

Well I don't need to read it, to judge the story. Monkey is a phenomenal writer, a bonafide perfectionist, a man of quality, even if he writes trash(lol) than I'll still read it. Trust me if your a regular here than you know what you'll get, but if you're new than I would suggest you to go and read his other stories, I guarantee it you'll not regret it.

3yr
p0sitv3s
p0sitv3sLv4

Starts out okay, but then just follows the whole "meet Straw Hats and follow the OP plot". Terrible FF, honestly one of your worst yet. If you want to basically re-read One Piece, by all means, go for it. It's basically One Piece from a schizophrenic MC's POV.

3yr
Theragingtaco88
Theragingtaco88Lv14

You know what, I am glad we get to see Monkey back right now. And, while there aren't many chapters, after seeing Monkey's growth as a writer throughout his different novels, I can say that I believe he can do justice and make the Price of Freedom better than the original.

3yr
ManofcultureQ_Q
ManofcultureQ_QLv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

only story development is 1 star for me, after 2nd personality disorder came out it just went downhill for me............................................

3yr
MeJr
MeJrLv4

i like it very much, havent read anything this fun in a while. I need more! Also is this a harem or no? I dont like harem.

3yr
EpicGamer123
EpicGamer123Lv4

Awesome so far. Big improvement from the OG novel. Love thirteen as a character and can imagine him actually being apart of the crew. That's how good a job you've done at integrating him into the one piece world. Just hope that the pairings different from the OG, I was never, and will never really be a fan of a Carrot pairing. Carry on the awesome work, I'll be looking forward to the future of this novel.

3yr
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