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Dao_of_snusnu
Dao_of_snusnuLv123yr
2021-11-27 21:11

It's Good.You're not gonna drop this right?Like every other novel you wrote...........................................I dunno how to write reviews

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Dark_Crow1111
Dark_Crow1111Author

will never

Cursed_sin
Cursed_sinLv13

Is this harem?

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JerryBeansMan
JerryBeansManLv14

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Shaan_Sharma
Shaan_SharmaLv2

he dropped it

Daoist8KYxaF
Daoist8KYxaFLv1

where r u know

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Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

This comment didn't age well

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The_Dark_Emparer
The_Dark_EmparerLv2

start uploading new chapter's ok ???

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HighLander
HighLanderLv3

Well... that didn't age well.

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Jerome_Evans_2442
Jerome_Evans_2442Lv12

well you lied

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Levvy8310
Levvy8310Lv15

Have you abandoned this novel for real or are you just being long? I would like like to see the continuation of this story but if you aren't even going to bother with a comment on what's taking so long I might as well abandon ship right here. As I came across this title 6 months ago and there has been no update. Very disappointing.

Baplex
BaplexLv3

bro lied

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Omnivastance
OmnivastanceLv14

Will never continue the story you mean

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One_Man_Army1
One_Man_Army1Lv4

Broo you dropped it 💀

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War_Priest
War_PriestLv12

First 'real' review here. First of all. Writing Quality: There are a few mistakes here and there, but overall it is readable with little to no difficulty. The mistakes are not that common either, but even then one could read the novel without issue. So 4 * is a good rating. Stability of Updates: So far I have seen 1-2 chapters per day, which is consistent. Nothing bad about that. Story Development: Typical cultivation novel, but even then the power realms ain't the same bs as 'body tempering' or some bs. The realms are huge and the apex realm is called 'Grand Paragon' not some bs. The apex realm in novel can literally make the heavenly laws shake and welcome 'its ruler.' So I have no issue with this either. Character Design: MC ain't bland, he has a life story and is nothing about that 'control my own fate' bs. He knows he is weak and isn't actively trying to find a way to cultivate because he knows he can't. Or can he? The wife is the most adorable thing I have read, she is cold to others but very overprotective over her husband. Their relationship develops quite well with a lot of funny interactions. The other side characters are also pretty interesting. They have their own role to play, and although there is some mystery to some characters it is slowly revealed. World Background: FANTASTIC!! Different Universes or 'realms' are part of the novel. Each universe has its own things and of course they are at odds with each other. The Empire and world is greatly worked on. How the apex cultivators control the universes and protect them is also great. I really have no issue with the novel besides the short chapters and occasional grammar mistake. Keep it up!

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