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Akselelator
AkselelatorLv22yr
2022-01-08 18:40

Отличный роман , отличное начало ! Мне очень понравились. Когда читал только не нравилось что гг такой слабый , но походу развития сюжета он становится более жестоким что мне очень нравится (смахивает на свою жену) . Пожалуйста не бросайте этот роман

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