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rawthentic
rawthenticLv141yr
2023-01-31 06:11

i have read almost 300 chapters of this book and want to write a quick review. this novel is not worth reading after the first 60 or so chapters. the MC is seemingly a very smart and careful person by the author that can get out of any situation, but right away, you discover he has the most broken system in any naruto fanfic. Also, the more read, the less fulfilling it gets since every 1 step for MC, he takes 10 steps back. Despite being able to easily kill elite jonin. he stays in a poor dormitory on metal bed. despite 300 chapters and insane power later he acts like a coward. He has no ambition, no character development, and no drive. Even the things he does himself, he lets other people take advantage of him and is left with nothing to an unnatural degree. besides using the system to get very strong, hedoesn'tt do anything for himself with it. i wouldnt recommend this novel since when you get to the point where i read it, you will feel upset that you wasted your time. it was such a cool, unique concept that was ruined by the author who wrote his mc like a robot.

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Murod
MurodLv3

thanks

Deathly_Rose
Deathly_RoseLv4

Thanks for warning us, I won’t read it since I don’t like disappointment

Akari_Shade
Akari_ShadeLv4

I agree, but you forgot to mention he is still training and he changes the storyline. The character is more like hybrid between Danzo and Black Zetsu.

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