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free_lifeLv52yr
2022-03-08 07:59

I have read mtl and to be honest at some point I was about to break my phone from anger, I continued reading hoping its gonna get better, but ch 352 killed it for me, the story did a free fall from acceptable to trash. If you don't mind a little illogical situations, slow paced story you can read this story up to 300+ chapters, after that : you've been warned.

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Adam_Clinton
Adam_ClintonLv13

What happened in ch 352?

HunterWindsrose
HunterWindsroseLv1

Acabo de leer solo el capítulo 352. La impresión que me dio es que el MC es extremadamente cauteloso y miedoso, quiere pasar desapercibido lo más que pueda. No tengo idea de qué impulsa a esto, pero la personalidad que tiene ciertamente es asquerosa para mi gusto. MC oculta que es un autor de un libro que Mikoto le gusta, y le otorga los créditos a Fugaku, lo cual hace que Mikoto lo adore. Que el MC ayude a recoger chicas a otros hombres no es mi taza de té, más si esa chica es una heroína del mundo Naruto (personaje con gran importancia en la trama). Me gusta un MC que sea de bajo perfil, pero me siento extremadamente incomodo con la personalidad de este MC, del tipo que puede abandonar todo para no resaltar.

Bro_is_bored
Bro_is_boredLv4

thank you very much for posion testing and saving my time. 🙏🙏

MF_THE_BOTH
MF_THE_BOTHLv5

what is he saying

HunterWindsrose:Acabo de leer solo el capítulo 352. La impresión que me dio es que el MC es extremadamente cauteloso y miedoso, quiere pasar desapercibido lo más que pueda. No tengo idea de qué impulsa a esto, pero la personalidad que tiene ciertamente es asquerosa para mi gusto. MC oculta que es un autor de un libro que Mikoto le gusta, y le otorga los créditos a Fugaku, lo cual hace que Mikoto lo adore. Que el MC ayude a recoger chicas a otros hombres no es mi taza de té, más si esa chica es una heroína del mundo Naruto (personaje con gran importancia en la trama). Me gusta un MC que sea de bajo perfil, pero me siento extremadamente incomodo con la personalidad de este MC, del tipo que puede abandonar todo para no resaltar.
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ghost_kuro
ghost_kuroLv1

writing quality 1 star, story development 1 star, character design 1 star, stability of update 4 star, world background 3 star, i dont know why this story seems to make me dull. i cant really feel any excitement or any feeling reading this chapter. i only feel ANNOYED every time the MC lie to other people. so strong and op yet the only word that comes from the MC's mouth is a lie. there is only two words that i can use to describe the MC: COWARD & HYPOCRITE. to justify my reason because MC is a living liar that lies to everyone he meets. MC is scared of everything. MC always stated that he does not like to take the first initiative to cause trouble for someone who did not wrong him. But then because of his fear of danzo he decided to sacrifice the whole uchiha clan. why i rate so low because, in terms of writing quality its too much useless repetitive description. what I'm trying to say is : person B : the apple is a fruit. the apple has a shape. the apple two colors .the apple is either red or green. apple is only one of many fruits but still red apple is more preferable.Red apple are generally more sweet and slightly more heavier in terms of weight. person A : shocked by the realization of red apple is more preferable. persob B : (continues to repeat) after thinking about it green apple and red apple are also in high demand. To tell you the truth the fruit we need is an apple. We need to find out the shape of the apple. we need to investigate the difference between two colour of the apple. We also need to find more red apple because it is more preferable. because red apple is more sweet and heavier than green apple. this this the writing quality of this fanfic. very repetitive. as for character Design is very bland and Boring. Normally when we read about MC getting new powers as a reader we will be excited to see the MC using the powers or train his best in it. BUT in this fanfic i am already numb when i see the mc get a new power . for example. MC got paper jutsu on early chapter then suddenly after a few more chapters he still get the same paper jutsu from reading mind. YET, the MC acted shocked as if he got the jutsu for the first time. many jutsu are being recycle as if the MC did not realize it. there is no growth for MC(immature> mature attitude/mindset), because he always runs away and kept a low profile.very cowardly and boring to read.

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