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HotWetDream
HotWetDreamLv143yr
2021-11-29 10:05

have read the Chinese version of this fanfic until the latest, it is still ongoing and I can say that this is very good. 😃[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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skiptail
skiptailLv4

How many chapters in the original? And what's your rating of the original translation?

HotWetDream
HotWetDreamLv14

454 chapters, hmm the plot is good enough, although some Jutsus are too exaggerated. overall, very recommended

skiptail:How many chapters in the original? And what's your rating of the original translation?
Abanmagan
AbanmaganLv5

Can You give me the name original?

HotWetDream
HotWetDreamLv14

人在木叶,暗部拷问忍者十年!

Abanmagan:Can You give me the name original?
OkamiI
OkamiILv4

have romance? and if there is, is it harem?

HotWetDream:人在木叶,暗部拷问忍者十年!
HotWetDream
HotWetDreamLv14

nope,no harem

OkamiI:have romance? and if there is, is it harem?
xMilfHunterx
xMilfHunterxLv5

romance?

HotWetDream:nope,no harem
HotWetDream
HotWetDreamLv14

none

xMilfHunterx:romance?
Thigs_0508
Thigs_0508Lv3

do you have chinese cliché? young masters and almost looking like wunxia

HotWetDream:none
HotWetDream
HotWetDreamLv14

I think no

Thigs_0508:do you have chinese cliché? young masters and almost looking like wunxia
AKARYUU
AKARYUULv14

If story has no romance its not complete.

HotWetDream:none
Mrmore
MrmoreLv4

especially in naruto fanfics

AKARYUU:If story has no romance its not complete.
Lord_Forger
Lord_ForgerLv4

It has. Minato x kushina

AKARYUU:If story has no romance its not complete.
Miguel_Fernandez_0626
Miguel_Fernandez_0626Lv1

Hola, esta historia me encanta, si alguien me puede ayudar a encontrar el fanfiction original(chino) estaría muy agradecido y para compartir de otros fanfiction que conosco. 🙏🏻🥺🙏🏻

HotWetDream
HotWetDreamLv14

Hola, el título del fanfiction original es "人在木叶,暗部拷问忍者十年!". Puede hacer una captura de pantalla de este comentario y usar la cámara del traductor de Google para identificar el carácter chino y copiar el texto para pegarlo en el navegador.

Miguel_Fernandez_0626:Hola, esta historia me encanta, si alguien me puede ayudar a encontrar el fanfiction original(chino) estaría muy agradecido y para compartir de otros fanfiction que conosco. 🙏🏻🥺🙏🏻
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writing quality 1 star, story development 1 star, character design 1 star, stability of update 4 star, world background 3 star, i dont know why this story seems to make me dull. i cant really feel any excitement or any feeling reading this chapter. i only feel ANNOYED every time the MC lie to other people. so strong and op yet the only word that comes from the MC's mouth is a lie. there is only two words that i can use to describe the MC: COWARD & HYPOCRITE. to justify my reason because MC is a living liar that lies to everyone he meets. MC is scared of everything. MC always stated that he does not like to take the first initiative to cause trouble for someone who did not wrong him. But then because of his fear of danzo he decided to sacrifice the whole uchiha clan. why i rate so low because, in terms of writing quality its too much useless repetitive description. what I'm trying to say is : person B : the apple is a fruit. the apple has a shape. the apple two colors .the apple is either red or green. apple is only one of many fruits but still red apple is more preferable.Red apple are generally more sweet and slightly more heavier in terms of weight. person A : shocked by the realization of red apple is more preferable. persob B : (continues to repeat) after thinking about it green apple and red apple are also in high demand. To tell you the truth the fruit we need is an apple. We need to find out the shape of the apple. we need to investigate the difference between two colour of the apple. We also need to find more red apple because it is more preferable. because red apple is more sweet and heavier than green apple. this this the writing quality of this fanfic. very repetitive. as for character Design is very bland and Boring. Normally when we read about MC getting new powers as a reader we will be excited to see the MC using the powers or train his best in it. BUT in this fanfic i am already numb when i see the mc get a new power . for example. MC got paper jutsu on early chapter then suddenly after a few more chapters he still get the same paper jutsu from reading mind. YET, the MC acted shocked as if he got the jutsu for the first time. many jutsu are being recycle as if the MC did not realize it. there is no growth for MC(immature> mature attitude/mindset), because he always runs away and kept a low profile.very cowardly and boring to read.

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