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SpoiledSecrets
SpoiledSecretsLv52yr
2022-01-10 02:55

I haven’t read much of it but I can tell you that this is basically a sign in novel. MC gets strong (not OP) pretty quickly and the rest is just him getting into situations he can avoid easily. The rest of characters have their IQ lowered because MC trains in the village but nobody seems to notice the random spikes of chakra that come when he practices jutsus.

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GreatDaoofspace
GreatDaoofspaceLv15

Romance? Harem?

SpoiledSecrets
SpoiledSecretsLv5

Nope

GreatDaoofspace:Romance? Harem?
Herohero
HeroheroLv4

there is no romance And no harem?

SpoiledSecrets:Nope
M_Shaz_3A
M_Shaz_3ALv15

??? this is not a sign in novel mate. and did he not cover his shadow clones with some paper jutsu to create hill or some thing so as to not be noticed??? and did he not make seals in Tower to not to be noticed??? even though this novel is slow 🐌 paced, does not have much action for a ninja novel fan- fic its unique in its style. as for Iq every character has low Iq including MC... but since this is a fan- fic of naruto where characters already have low iq except a few it's not novels problem. over all its a unique novel and I like reading it.[img=recommend]

SpoiledSecrets
SpoiledSecretsLv5

That’s why I said “basically a sign in”. Also, someone who just started making seals can make seals powerful enough to hide from a master of seals? Make it make sense.

M_Shaz_3A:??? this is not a sign in novel mate. and did he not cover his shadow clones with some paper jutsu to create hill or some thing so as to not be noticed??? and did he not make seals in Tower to not to be noticed??? even though this novel is slow 🐌 paced, does not have much action for a ninja novel fan- fic its unique in its style. as for Iq every character has low Iq including MC... but since this is a fan- fic of naruto where characters already have low iq except a few it's not novels problem. over all its a unique novel and I like reading it.[img=recommend]
Yurekli_kedi
Yurekli_kediLv2

Haven't he used like a thousand shadow clones for studying fuinjutsu for weeks? Since he actually did release and summon the clones again and again, the total knowledge gained must be in the scale of decades. Furthermore, he had been training on THE Uzumaki's Fuinjutsu books, so I think that it's only natural that he has been able to get to the stage he is in.

SpoiledSecrets:That’s why I said “basically a sign in”. Also, someone who just started making seals can make seals powerful enough to hide from a master of seals? Make it make sense.
MF_THE_BOTH
MF_THE_BOTHLv5

how the f did he got that many chakra and withstand the backlash from processing all that memory

Yurekli_kedi:Haven't he used like a thousand shadow clones for studying fuinjutsu for weeks? Since he actually did release and summon the clones again and again, the total knowledge gained must be in the scale of decades. Furthermore, he had been training on THE Uzumaki's Fuinjutsu books, so I think that it's only natural that he has been able to get to the stage he is in.
pirvu_mircea
pirvu_mirceaLv3

There are many things to agree or disagree with, but the main problem, which is also CANON , is that shadow clone jutsu CANNOT be used for vast amounts of information processing. This is the reason neither the third hokage nor the seventh hokage use the jutsu too much while doing paperwork, and always complain about it . Therefore, MC using 1 googolplex shadow clones to learn fuinjutsu is unrealistic .

Yurekli_kedi:Haven't he used like a thousand shadow clones for studying fuinjutsu for weeks? Since he actually did release and summon the clones again and again, the total knowledge gained must be in the scale of decades. Furthermore, he had been training on THE Uzumaki's Fuinjutsu books, so I think that it's only natural that he has been able to get to the stage he is in.
1Sol
1SolLv4

iirc- the reward he gets from reading the memories of normal people is usually just increases in chakra or soul strength. The soul part could explain his ability to handle the massive amounts of information.

MF_THE_BOTH:how the f did he got that many chakra and withstand the backlash from processing all that memory
Lc_The_Second
Lc_The_SecondLv4

Well... I was already disappointed by the synopsis that says he's transmigrated (knows the plot) and after says he's gonna learn how cruel the world is by reading the minds of others... Like. couldn't he guess it by the series he's watched ?

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ghost_kuro
ghost_kuroLv1

writing quality 1 star, story development 1 star, character design 1 star, stability of update 4 star, world background 3 star, i dont know why this story seems to make me dull. i cant really feel any excitement or any feeling reading this chapter. i only feel ANNOYED every time the MC lie to other people. so strong and op yet the only word that comes from the MC's mouth is a lie. there is only two words that i can use to describe the MC: COWARD & HYPOCRITE. to justify my reason because MC is a living liar that lies to everyone he meets. MC is scared of everything. MC always stated that he does not like to take the first initiative to cause trouble for someone who did not wrong him. But then because of his fear of danzo he decided to sacrifice the whole uchiha clan. why i rate so low because, in terms of writing quality its too much useless repetitive description. what I'm trying to say is : person B : the apple is a fruit. the apple has a shape. the apple two colors .the apple is either red or green. apple is only one of many fruits but still red apple is more preferable.Red apple are generally more sweet and slightly more heavier in terms of weight. person A : shocked by the realization of red apple is more preferable. persob B : (continues to repeat) after thinking about it green apple and red apple are also in high demand. To tell you the truth the fruit we need is an apple. We need to find out the shape of the apple. we need to investigate the difference between two colour of the apple. We also need to find more red apple because it is more preferable. because red apple is more sweet and heavier than green apple. this this the writing quality of this fanfic. very repetitive. as for character Design is very bland and Boring. Normally when we read about MC getting new powers as a reader we will be excited to see the MC using the powers or train his best in it. BUT in this fanfic i am already numb when i see the mc get a new power . for example. MC got paper jutsu on early chapter then suddenly after a few more chapters he still get the same paper jutsu from reading mind. YET, the MC acted shocked as if he got the jutsu for the first time. many jutsu are being recycle as if the MC did not realize it. there is no growth for MC(immature> mature attitude/mindset), because he always runs away and kept a low profile.very cowardly and boring to read.

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