Hello, Author here. This is my first work so I hope I can learn and improve a lot by working on it. If you have any criticism or suggestion about the story you can tell me here. I'll do my best to work on them and improve the story. Anyway, on the story itself, as I have tagged, it focuses on the adventure and action aspects. I want to write a nice adventure in the Tales Uzer Universe, specifically inside the tower of god with a way different main character and casts than what's on the Manhwa. Maybe there's little romance? I don't know yet but even if there's romance, it will amount very little so I didn't tag it. You see here, Liu Guanyi, the MC, has a way different mindset and character than Bam, a naive and kind kid. Unlike Bam when he goes inside the tower clueless of everything, here, Liu Guanyi has his own plans and ambitions. Anyway, that's enough I think so I hope you guys give it a shot, it means a lot to me, thank you!

Very nice, the grammar is good. The characters are quite good. TOG fanfics are rare on this site, and there's nothing good from them. However, this one is really above average that doesn't follow Bam or any cliché like that so it's a fresh breath of air. I just hope that the Author will keep the standard and won't drop this good story.

It's a good story, unfortunately the MC is disappointing. He hides behind Adori like a little puppy frightened by everything that moves, but dares to come and talk about the martial way and risk taking. He literally does nothing in this story and leaves Adori to deal with everything, he hides his strength so much that he has become dull and non-existent. There is nothing worse than such an MC.

I do not like that apart from sinso has its internal energy, it should be cultivated using sinso as in all cultivation novels that are cultivated with the love of heaven and earth, but what a coincidence that this guy cultivates without the energy of the world and its cultivation. It originates from his body, I don't like that, if he cultivated using sinso his techniques were used with sinso and his talent was not mediocre compared to geniuses this would be interesting, which for the love of God is supposed to be an irregular but apart from his cultivation knowledge and his experience is ordinary in all his talents, compared to other irregular he is mediocre and the least talented, if he did not have his cultivation knowledge he would be behind the regulars with a good talent, which That is kind of irregular, and he mentioned he was going to merge the sinso with his cultivation, I don't know if he plows it but to begin with, the type of cultivation he practices does not make sense, it is more similar to the cultivation of dragon ball or ken ichi, than to the internal culture of Chinese novels.

Although it is still barely a few chapters, I can say that story is quite good, overall. In terms of grammar, there a little to no mistakes. If there is a mistake it's mostly on the usage of semicolon that's a little off at times. It's very tricky so even I see a lot of experienced writers often misuse them so the grammar is pretty good, I'd say. The updates are pretty stable, a chapter a day so it's average. As long as the author keeps it up, it's up to standard in the expected rate of updates on Webnovel, which is good. Now, the plot itself is barely unveiled. However, so far the flow is quite good and the dialogue and interaction feels natural. There's the mystery about some things that the author hasn't explained so it gives off a certain effect that makes the readers engaged so it's good. Overall, if you like the premise I'd say give it a shot for a dozen chapters or so before making your own evaluation whether you want to read it to the end or not. Anyway, continue your hard work, sir, and thank you!

extremely good fic but is destroyed by author making mc act like a weakling. if r added the hiding true strength tag I would not complain but he make mc ALWAYS act like weakling and after chapter 65 mc act like he is the weakest of his team even worse than xin. it become super boring and annoying to read

Very good, I like it so far. The MC is smart, the storyline is quite good even though it hasn't been much. Everything and the development is reasonable and logical, which is something rare on this site so that's a big plus. If you like a smart and cautious main lead, go give it a chance. Anyway, I'm really waiting for more development onward.

Very nice story with a logical and reasonable progression. I am just hoping that the Author won't drop it halfway. I don't want a good and rare TOG fanfic to disappear.

It could have been good, but mc hides his true strength and never shows it, also came expecting a villan mc but what i got couldnt even be classified as anti-hero