Although it is still barely a few chapters, I can say that story is quite good, overall. In terms of grammar, there a little to no mistakes. If there is a mistake it's mostly on the usage of semicolon that's a little off at times. It's very tricky so even I see a lot of experienced writers often misuse them so the grammar is pretty good, I'd say. The updates are pretty stable, a chapter a day so it's average. As long as the author keeps it up, it's up to standard in the expected rate of updates on Webnovel, which is good. Now, the plot itself is barely unveiled. However, so far the flow is quite good and the dialogue and interaction feels natural. There's the mystery about some things that the author hasn't explained so it gives off a certain effect that makes the readers engaged so it's good. Overall, if you like the premise I'd say give it a shot for a dozen chapters or so before making your own evaluation whether you want to read it to the end or not. Anyway, continue your hard work, sir, and thank you!
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Your review makes me want to read this story. I wish we had more reviewers like you, unlike the ones who just spam emogois instead of explaining why the story is good enough to warrant such high praise.
