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Gavyn_Mack
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2022-05-25 00:22

Honestly the story bis really good, and though it is sometimes cliche, it's able to stand out, what make it even better is the fact it's not a harem story, I'm so tired of those. the story is long enough for you to enjoy it l, with enough mysteries that keep you wanting to know more. At first nothing really happened, the mc never got into fights and it was more mystery after mystery, but now the Mc gets into fights and some mysteries were solved. also each character has at least a background, the only problem is that the you will never learn more about a character you focus some much on yang su, I kinda forget about the others, there is also so much happening in the story so it's hard to tell where the plot is going to go next. I also think that if the author is going to show romance, please don't focus to much on it, because when I read this I want to focus on the action, the story and romance is fine, but when your story is mostly action with no romance and all of a sudden there is a whole chapter dedicated to romance, it feels weird and random. but this is just my opinion, I am but one out of...... a lot.

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Hm, thanks for leaving this review, I'll definitely keep this in mind going forward[img=recommend]

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Hey there you lovely reader!! Tseth, the author of this absolutely cringy book here. If you're disappointed about the lack of tags, here they are!! Reincarnation, Adventure Action, Comedy Cultivation, Academy Genius, Faceslapping Beasttaming, Thestrongactingweak Multiple realms, shameless mc Maybe romance? Not sure as yet ---- This novel might contain sentence and spelling errors so I'd like to apologize for that. I'll be going through my chapters from time to time to check if anything got past me when I first uploaded them. But if you lovely readers happen to spot any of them, due point it out so I can fix them.[img=recommend][img=recommend] This novel is technically based in the same universe as my other book, The WU Clan's Rise(so check that out if you haven't already) I don't want to say much, since the connection between the two stories is a part of the overall plot. But what I can say is that I have major plans for both books that'll leave you lovely readers at the edge of your seat from the emotional, funny, and hot-blooded scenes depicted in these novels of mine. So if you want to see all of that happen, then go ahead and add this book to your library to see my future updates. And remember you can support this and my other novels by voting or just leaving a comment. Ps: I gave this 4 stars because of my sporadical updates. And I know, I know, there should be two chaps daily at the very least!! I really want to make that happen but with the fact that I'm still in college and some other personal stuff, it's going to be that way for a while. But don't worry you lovely readers!! I'll still update every. single. week. Even if it's only three or two chapters. See ya!! ~waves gb~

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