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Daoofmilk
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2022-03-12 00:48

This story is amazing, the characters feel genuine at least the main and secondary ones the rest don't really matter lol. The different Qi's reminds me of reverend Insanity which is cool however what I didn't like was the author making the the MC's assistant start with fire qi which is constantly used by every mc out there and it's just annoying seeing as he had 6 elements to chose from and he chose fire but it's fine just a minor thing. As for world building it's very good but I just hooe the author doesn't introduce stuff too quick and then gets overwhelmed by everything and then forgets about something. Story is developing nicely I just really wish to see more of the family. Also going back to the Qi's I really wish that the author introduces more characters with uncommon qi types like poison,sound,wood,water etc However these are just my preferences and the author can do what he wants. As for the updates they are very frequent just that the chapters are short or atleast they feel short. but the quality isn't really dropping so just keep doing what your doing author and you'll be fine

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Tsetth
TsetthLv14

awesome!! thanks for this review it made day even more pleasant🥰 There's a reason why I made Yang Su slightly more attuned with Fire Qi instead of the others, and it has to do with his little village, which will be mention soon😁 Hmm, as for the introduction of Xi Shen's family that's actually coming up in a few chapters as well, and I am very excited to write those chapters since I've been thinking about them for days now... I try to write between 1500-2000 words, but the recent chapters usually fall in the 1550-1700 range. However, I'll see what I can do!!😁

Daoofmilk
DaoofmilkLv4

1500 words is a lot, I've tried starting fanfics and I have trouble just writing 100 words so you doing daily updates with 1500 word chapters is amazing AND your quality isnt dropping so don't feel pressured to make your chapters longer. I guess I just read too fast lol anyway keep it up author I know it's hard so thank you

Tsetth:awesome!! thanks for this review it made day even more pleasant🥰 There's a reason why I made Yang Su slightly more attuned with Fire Qi instead of the others, and it has to do with his little village, which will be mention soon😁 Hmm, as for the introduction of Xi Shen's family that's actually coming up in a few chapters as well, and I am very excited to write those chapters since I've been thinking about them for days now... I try to write between 1500-2000 words, but the recent chapters usually fall in the 1550-1700 range. However, I'll see what I can do!!😁
Daoofmilk
DaoofmilkLv4

Also I liked the way you made ghuanyu the antagonist/enemy without the cliches that sorround this genre. It felt natural and there was a genuinely good reason for them to become enemies

Tsetth:awesome!! thanks for this review it made day even more pleasant🥰 There's a reason why I made Yang Su slightly more attuned with Fire Qi instead of the others, and it has to do with his little village, which will be mention soon😁 Hmm, as for the introduction of Xi Shen's family that's actually coming up in a few chapters as well, and I am very excited to write those chapters since I've been thinking about them for days now... I try to write between 1500-2000 words, but the recent chapters usually fall in the 1550-1700 range. However, I'll see what I can do!!😁
Tsetth
TsetthLv14

haha, thank you and thank you

Daoofmilk:Also I liked the way you made ghuanyu the antagonist/enemy without the cliches that sorround this genre. It felt natural and there was a genuinely good reason for them to become enemies
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